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eh has done another work but i not so sure need to edit anything pls give some comment ^^

made some update ^^

ok now first i use the white colour bg but Chloe-chan give me some ideal of making it into pink and i not sure which is better pls help me choose 1 of them thx T_T

ok now i did some updates ^^

Wapy

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so bright!... oh... the outline is so smoth... too smoth... nice effects arounfd the image. try another colours.

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Chloe

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The extraction is ok, but I'm not so sure about the blurry hair stuff behind her. While the bg is cute, I think a softer pink color would go better, since she's all pink.
Also, remember that all wallpapers must be 1024 by 768 or higher. MT doesn't accept 800 by 600 anymore.

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I agree with chloe-chan a softer pink would do better, also the text needs to seperate itself more from the background so that u dont have too try to figure out what its saying. Keep it up

ok i will do 1 more edit and c how ^^

sacredsky

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Haunted by Ghosts

It's cute, but I think its a little cluttered :O Maybe if you remove some of the birds and bubbles?

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Kuzoku

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Sweet Dreamer

I would have to agree with sacredsky, the background is a bit too clutterred. It distracts the eye from the scan which should be the main focus of the wallie. Try to make it a little more simple. Maybe considder using a gradient that runs from pink to white instead of the solid pink background? Keep up the good work.

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solidvanz

Silent Mercenary

Nice picture but the colour of background need to be soft and not too bright.

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sukumei

sukumei

Running A Critiquing Service

TOOO much pink oh and your name stands out too much. You had best include you email and your ****.minitokyo.net. Black strips on top and bottom would make this easier

I would like to run a friendly critiquing service for Minitokyo artists. I will try to make my opinions professional and defiantly unbiased although i will speak ideas for the general public. Critiquing service MT thread

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