'Death Note' wall, my first submission here! Comments needed.

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Hey everyone ^_^'

Well, this is my first submission here, so I wanted to hear your opinions and critiques.
To tell you little about this wall:
my intention was to make an 'old-school' wall, that is, no special effects, no vectoring etc.
So, I just extracted and cleaned the scan, and started working on the background. I knew it wouldn't be the greatest idea to use too many effects, since the scan itself already occupies most of the 'working area'.
So, I just pictured some sort of "demonic" sky, and started going from there. What came out of it represents both worlds from manga - human and Shinigami world. Well, my way of seeing it, anyway :D
Also, you'll notice Raito is sort of 'glowing' - this is not a bad scan LOL, but I made that to make him stand out more, and to make him look a bit more surreal (demonic, as you wish).

Anyway, I would very much appreciate your suggestions!
Here's the link:

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Mnemeth

Mnemeth

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Thats not too bad. I'd make the sky a bit redder and put more of a back light effect into the picture if you were going for the demonic look. I'd light them from the front with a dim light to throw their features into shadows and then make the back ground a reddish sunset/rise.

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  • Oct 24, 2006

Faqir

Faqir

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it looks plain. I mean I like the "coloring" but it lacks much. it's right of the manga scan already, you should make it seem not so much like a plain manga scan...more work on the bg and maybe borders or something like that. :)

hope it helps. :)

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