May I have your comments about my walli?

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Hi Everyone! :)
Can I please have your comments/opinions about my wallie?
Thank you,
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v244/ealpha_scorpio/moon_princess.jpg

  • Dec 04, 2006

asinine

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The lighting against cagalli is a little to bright...
I dont really like the planet that is over another planet at the background...
Cause it is making your wallpaper look weird... other than that it is hard to comment about your other details cause your resolution is quite small...

Oh yes the horizon... the one that divide the sky and the sea... you might want to make it fade a little more ^_^

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Actually the resolution is bigger it's just that I had to upload it on photobucket.

Try this:
http://xs110.xs.to/xs110/06491/moon_princess.jpg.xs.jpg

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  • Dec 04, 2006

Mnemeth

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I agree with asinine. Cagalli is a little to washed out as is Athrun to a lesser degree.

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  • Dec 04, 2006

soujiokita

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Both scans look quite poor quality, you might want to vector them. I also don't really like the text at the bottom.
Good luck!

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I think the biggest problem with this one is the fact that the scans of Cagalli and Athrun are done in two different styles. Cagalli is done in the Destiny the Edge style, that has a more shoujo and mature feel to it, and uses soft-cell and airbrush shading, while Athrun is in the anime style with traditional cell-shading and the original Hisashi Hirai style... so either find an image of Athrun from the Edge, or an anime picture of Cagalli

The extraction looks passible, though the edges of Cagalli could use some smoothing out. The image of Athrun, like others said, look a bit low quality, looks like it came from a screencap, esp if you look at the red parts, there's quite a bit pixelation.

the water looks too realistic (same with the moon), for the anime-style (esp the cell-shading).

I kinda understand your idea, so maybe move Athrun left a little bit so that he's more in the corner, and scale him down a bit. move Cagalli to the upper right a bit more, and maybe lower the opacity so it seems like he's thinking about her.

See what you can do to increase the quality of your scans first before you move to the background :)

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