Hey Chiaki! There's a very...light feeling to your wallpaper, which is nice. I think the second rendition has some
pretty interesting designs in the back. They remind me a bit of the treble sign. The only problem I have with it is that
it becomes kind of busy and detracts from the focus of the character. On the other hand, the Version 1's background
feels a little plain; Maybe not enough variation. Try meeting the two versions in the middle, so there are some designs
in the back, but not so much. Also, try changing the direction sizes of the stars, it becomes a bit repetitive; I only
see 2 stars that are different =P. The scan is pretty well extracted, personally, but it still looks a bit grainy. Try
doing what a lot of people do: create a duplicate layer, add a slight gaussian blur, and lower the
transparency.
All in all, I think the scan fits nicely with the wall and doesn't stick out like a sore thumb; It blends quite
nicely.
Nice work so far! I'm excited to see what it turns out in the final. Good luck!
*edit* can you feedback on my wall too? Everyone's ignoring it -_-. It's the Shining Tears one. Thanks!