Danielly

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halo ^^ umm i made this wallie but i'm not sure if i can submit it
here i used some scas fom MT galley
and some i got in this site : http://www.wksecretparadise.cjb.net/
and in some of them i didn't wored so much....
am i breaking any policy if i subimit this wallie?

herea thumbial from it ^^

http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4846/lookingfoweiss0fn.th.jpg

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Devilet

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On full view, I see there are quite a few blurry parts. The most noticable is the one in the magnifying glass. It's a bit hard on the eyes if it's too blurry is what I'm getting at. xD

I know the kind of theme you are doing, but it's a very busy wallpaper, maybe decide on removing some cards ... Ah, the magnifying glass could use a little highlight on it to look more like glass, right right? hmmm, I will say some positives though, nice use of textures, and making the closeup of the pic in the magnifying glass. Keep it up!

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thank you for the comment ^^ i'm glad you decided to help me ^^
i'm not good making wallies ^^
they always went out poor but thankx XD

looking at your comment i made this new one
the magnifying glass turn the image kinda blur
humm i tryed to work on it but i think i failed again...
i was thinking about change the effect to another kind of Lent....

here's the new version ^^
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7616/lookingforweiss026cr.th.jpg

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The image through the magnifying glass is still too blurry. You might want to find a larger scan to use under it rather than sizing up the scan you already have. Use the blend tool on the character for friend and the text for White Cross so it looks like it's on the paper.

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hey thanks for the help ^^ sailorchiron
what about this version here?
i changed the effect from the magnifying

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/4915/lookingforweiss021xx.th.jpg

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yes, the magnifiying look very cool now, but for the perspective the end should be cylindrical.
the other things are really good ^__^

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may I ack You dear one thing... how does this Aya line 'I'm not Death... blahblah' is in japanise?

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Only one more thing and this is going to look great. The cards that you have the profiles of the guys on need to have shadows under them to show that they are stacked on top of each other. Right now they blend together into one big piece.

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