*poem* forever

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Inuyasha-FAN

Inuyasha-FAN

I'm back

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that one girl that I love,
she is everything to me,
everything she is,
all that she is,
makes me smile,
how she talks,
how she laughs,
just makes my day,
everything in my life,
is complete with her.
everyday I wait for her,
everyday I'm happy,
knowing she loves me.
she helps me all the time,
big and small.
that girl is so important to me,
I'd do anything just to see her smile.
even now,
I see her infront of me,
while I write this,
I think about her,
all the time.
I wish we can be together now,
stay together,
forever.

I made this last night when I woke up lol let me know what you think.

  • Aug 16, 2007

Sulibres

Sulibres

Avert your eyes from the truth.

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It's not brilliant, but it's not rotten either. I think you've done better before, but I'm confused as to who the girl is since you write alot of poems dedicated to a certain girl.

  • Aug 16, 2007
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I really like it its just so sweet. :)

what am i to do with you?
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  • Aug 16, 2007

Inuyasha-FAN

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thanks :D

  • Aug 18, 2007
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OH MY FLIP! Great hear from you again!.!.!
I thought you were done with poems?.!.?
Either way, nice poem, reminds me of the ones my friend Tabitha makes, more like stories, but good either way. But like Sulibres said, you've made better.

  • Aug 20, 2007

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