wall mirror kitty

Hi minianimegirl, I'll get straight onto everything I think needs fixing ;)

- REFLECTION
Great work on the different coloured reflection!
But when you sit next to a mirror, and look at it from the front, you will only see the SIDE of the girl. Try it out :D Place an object (preferably irregular in shape) and see what it looks like when you look at it front on. I'm sure the text will also be at an angle, and be larger on one end than the other (due to perspective).

Because of this the size of the reflection will be smaller, too.

Also, because your girl is set back from the mirror, the reflection should also be set back (ie. more to the left) because of the set back. At the moment the reflection is right to the bottom edge of the mirror.

- FLOOR SKIRTING
The floor skirting looks good, but the outlines are very jagged and pixelly. Did you by chance draw that with a pencil on the computer? Usually pencils do that. You're better off using a brush at 1pixel than a pencil at 1pixel. Which program did you use to make this?

- MIRROR
There should be a little bit of light reflecting off the mirror like as if it's a piece of glass, so usually there'd be 2-3 white (semi-transparent) parallelograms (different sizes) to show that it's a reflective surface.

OTHER:

- Shadows? Since there must be light in the room in order to have reflections, the girl should have a shadow under her.

- Textures? Ever thought of making making the wall seem plastery in texture, or covering it with wallpaper?
What about the floor skirtings, perhaps they are timber?

EXTRACTION

Your extraction is very good! But there's one disturbing thing and that is just above her hands it's missing a chunk. Does that mean she's not wearing any underwear? Either way, I think it's better to have that bit coloured in, because it's looks kind of strange ^_^'

Anyway, that's all I have to say :D It's good work, nice quality ^__^

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