lilwolfmaiden

lilwolfmaiden

Welcome to my Unseen World.

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I am long overdue with my poem posting, aren't I? :) I have a bunch of other finished poems I'll try to get on posting. But to avoid overwhelming anyone I'll post only 2 every other day.

Here's today's.

Unfinished
It seems nowadays that no one
Finishes what they start
We all get our work done for us
We don't have to play our part
Everything in life
Left without an ending
For what ever the reason
We're vainly depending
Life, thoughts, sentences,
dreams, relationships, books
Nothing will get finished
Judging by the looks
Everything could be settled
If we finish what we begin
But we want to be many things
In the end we never win
We can't pick something
And see it through
Before beginning another
It's pitiful but it's true
I can't blame them though
I don't even know them
But I slipped through as well
I never finished this ....

GearStalker05

GearStalker05

Sara, my Beloved...

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ooooooh, very interesting. ...and how true.

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"Worth dying for. Worth killing for. Worth going to Hell for. Amen."

WolfMaster

WolfMaster

The Hunter

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very good :)

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NICE

4, 8, 15, 16, 23, & 42

95Elizabeth

95Elizabeth

.:Breathe:.

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Wow! It's been a long time since you posted a poem! As touching as usual... can't wait for the next!

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vatican92

vatican92

糖分

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Very true...... and very ironic ending

俺のこの剣
こいつが届く範囲は俺の国だ

springheeljack298

springheeljack298

Spacious Thoughts

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very well written and very true great job cat

Ghetto Bhudda in the second set, Breaking out in a cold sweat.
I'll meet you in the music. We meet in the music,those we never met.
Keep dancing like there's nobody watching
Everyone can win the toss.I may wander, bit I am never lost.

Lionhearted911

Lionhearted911

~:. LioNe$s .:~

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awwwwwwww really nice!
such an interesting poem

keep it up ^^
hope to read more of your work soon! Q(^_^Q) *cheers*

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FaMiLy MeAn$ NoBoDy GeTs LefT BeHinD 0r ... FoRgoTTen ... ^^

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