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Love like in the Dark ~Poem~

lilwolfmaiden

lilwolfmaiden

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I personally like how this poem turned out, and it is yet another poem of mine that successfully gets out another jumbled opinion of mine on life in an understandable manner. Yayy. *claps*

Love like in the Dark
Love has become so shallow
It's all about money and looks
It's become just so common
Yet it is not in the books

Cheating and using is not seldom
So many are fake and untrue
Lies are a necessity these days
For a relationship between two

Lust has overpowered love
People have now no control
What is the point of it anymore
You're basically on marital parol

It starts with thier looks
Then to thier state of power
Only a "good catch" do you allow to
Darken your doorway at an early hour

If they could love like you and I do
The way we love like in the dark
The way nothing else matters
But what is in our hearts

In the dark you can't see their looks
It doesn't matter what they do
You know it's now and forever
It matters if they are really true

What all of you long for
You know won't be always there
With age all dies
Except for the love between a true pair

Looks die quickly with age
Good-looks never seem to last long
And when they get fired
You'll just mark the relationship as wrong

Why can't you see with your heart
Why are you so vain
Why do you always put yourself
Through unnecessary pain?

But do as you wish
I can't define who you are
But if you continue this
The path to correction will be far

Your choices are yours though
Lecturing you was my part
But again I will remind you
Try to love like in the dark

GearStalker05

GearStalker05

Sara, my Beloved...

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Oooooooh... Very thought provoking.
...and I agree with every word.

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95Elizabeth

95Elizabeth

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Big sister is great! ^^
You're still young but you know more than an old woman! And I don't mean that in a bad way...

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azyl12

azyl12

Lucifer's Angel

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I..am..amazed....

Break a heart...replace it for a new one but not the same one...

vatican92

vatican92

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Very nice expression
Wonder if we truely can love in the dark........
Creative idea indeed

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Lionhearted911

Lionhearted911

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... so amazing!
... T_T and touching too...

...awwwww it's so nice
and i must say, thanks for the lecture ^^

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FaMiLy MeAn$ NoBoDy GeTs LefT BeHinD 0r ... FoRgoTTen ... ^^

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Very nice poem, Lilwolfmaiden ^^

Too bad people are obsessed with looks these days, physical appearance is not all that matters T_T Good looks won't last for long, like you stated in your poem. It's better to look for the inner beauty, ne?

Hehe, look at me, talking nonsense again ^_^' ...Inner beauty.....yeah right.

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