lilwolfmaiden

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I am very proud of this poem, it is another strong belief of mine that is one of the world's problems. And to solve any confusion, the term "pass the stone" refers to passing the responsibilty and effort and work onto someone else, letting them do it. Enjoy~

Pass the Stone
You say it's someone else's job rather than your own
You refuse to care and instead you pass the stone

So many problems in the world, we can fix them all
But no one will step up, no one will take the fall

Our past is tainted, we're corrupting the future to come
How can you all live like this, how are you so numb

We can't fix the past, no use dwelling on that
But the future is only just coming, you can't just sit back

We've all made so many mistakes that it seems a waste
To stop now, but we can change if we make haste

No matter how much we have all messed up
Everyday is another chance, but that too we corrupt

Even if you are a perfect person who never did wrong
I can guarentee you that that won't last long

And you want to live a simple life you say
But it is our duty, not another's, to make tomorrow a better day

We all must pitch in, to make a better world
But we must first set example for all the boys and girls

Of course it's not that easy, one person has to make it start
After that it's up to us to realize our part

So do what you believe can make the world worth the stay
Stand up and help, no matter what people say

I would love to be the person to start the downfall
Of our mistakes and welcome the new world for all

But if I am, do not leave me alone
And please, please, please do not pass the stone

ImmortalRose

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Wow thats really a deep poem :D

And i do agree with it very much this world there is so many thing wrong and people...we can change it but no on tries it really sad i mean some do try but its not enough.

Very nice poem though keep it up! :D

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when your time is up,
you can't just turn it upside down and start over again.

ShadowN1NJ4

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It's great ^^

Like Rose I agree. There's not alot one lone person can do about the nedless problems in the world because the problems interlock and each one leads to another. Eveyone is so short sighted about the obvious answers and no one can see past the problems that the answer will cause. They need to because those small problems vanish after the answer is completed.

Again, great poem and I hope you don't mind my small rant/answer thing ^^ All the answers seem so obvious to me but no one wants to try.

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GearStalker05

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Wow! Pretty impressive.

I agree wholeheartedly with your standpoint, though I have to say one thing. Everyone seeks change; the problem is they expect other people to make the changes for them.

....but it is not my place to rant. Another great poem!

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Lionhearted911

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waaaaaaaaa sooo nice! *looking dazzled*
very nice ^^ you sure got talent! don't ever leave it to rot ne!
*applauds* very very nice! ^^

thanks for the lovely share, it sure is a nice poem...hehe i said it before but i can't resist saying it again: soo nice ^^

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nimiru

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wow! that was very amazing! that gave me some inspiration. i really like how you put it all together. i write poems too, but not as good as this.

thanks for sharing! :)

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vatican92

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Quite true how the world is so corrupt and wont set the path for the future generation and rather just live to only to themselves......

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