lilwolfmaiden

lilwolfmaiden

Welcome to my Unseen World.

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Gosh! Everytime I say I'm back I end up leaving again. I don't have internet but I'll post poems when I get a chance, I've got a lot to catch up on.

You may see that my poetry has branched off yet again, I have started writing life lessons or teaching through my poems, but I still write how I used to, I just have a variety now.

I can't remember where my inspiration sparked for this one. I remember it had something to do with English class. Anyways this is my view on someone else dying.

Be Careful
When you see someone is dying
But you can tell they are not trying

You might leave and walk away
Hope they die another die

But ultimately you'd leave them alone
To die or heal on their own

Because you are not their owner
They made themself a loner

You think it wrong to interfere
They are them and that is clear

Leave nature to it's course
Life isn't something you shouldn't force

Or maybe you'll stop and do what you can
It is man's job to help other man

You try and you try
Pray for them not to die

And if they're lost you're to no blame
But your life won't be the same

But if it works, and they do live
Much thanks they will give

But though you may not know who they are
They are your responsibility now, risky by far

You're now the reason they are still here
You're responsible for where their life will steer

If they do horrid things in their life
For you there'll be much strife

You are now their owner, their warm-hearted master
With each one of their actions, your heart will beat faster

You're the one who kept their light aflame
For their deeds, you are to blame

But maybe they'll do good
Like a grateful person should

Maybe they'll help you out
Or do kind things all about

But no matter what they do
The blame is upon you

95Elizabeth

95Elizabeth

.:Breathe:.

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My, I think it's one of your best ones so far. Though all of your poems are just amazing anyway ^_^ You seem to be so wise :D

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GearStalker05

GearStalker05

Sara, my Beloved...

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Very powerful work, friend. Very thought provoking as well.

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"Worth dying for. Worth killing for. Worth going to Hell for. Amen."

maverickmechanic

maverickmechanic

I'll find my own way

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Good work. I don't know why, but I put a heavy metal beat to it. Sounds good in my head tough.

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May winds of fortune bring you luck.
May oceans of knowledge carry you far.
May mountains of strength guide you on.

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