Tought i haven't finished the"Welcome to the Princess World dark wall XD I made a new wall during these days
(two exactly XD) and well here it is, it's from Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai (also submitted scan :) )
Deadly Love in
the Night.. i still dont know what title should i put to it XD
oh and please dont mention any extyractionproblems because that's only a scethch of
the whole thing! when i recieve the suggestions, i'll fix that problem, please suggest me what should i add
to it?
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The background is nice and really suitable too but I think the petal shouldn't red, it would be nice if it's white or blue ^^ that's I think ^^
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I think you don't need anything else on this wall...it's good as it is...the clouds are cool and the color of the sky matches the girls good :)
just extract them better as you said you would and submit the wall as it is ;)
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I like it just as it is.
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i love the wallpaper, although yeah maybe the petals should be of a different colour. also maybe scatter it a little more, i think it would look lovely. maybe you could also darken the characters alittle more, like their really in the night sky kinda thing. the fonts... hmm... i love the font, just that, it kinda looks out of place... other than that everything else looks good! ^-^
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i agree with raven its ok how it is.
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Everything looks right, but are they floating? XD I like the idea of the wallpaper, but it's much better to get the scan vectored...
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Hi hi Miku, I got some off time and thought I would help you out with your new wall. ^^
Okie, first off, the girls don't blend in well enough with the background. I'm not saying it looks awful or anything, it's actually quite pretty. But I think you could clean them up a bit, especially since like christabel has said before, it looks a little pixelated.. My personal recommendation is that you repaint it a bit, to make it smoother. I think I don't need to explain how, since from what I've seen from your sky, you know how to paint. ^^ But if you do need help, don't hesitate to ask.Second, it's slightly odd that the girls are brighter than the moon. Looking at the scan, it seems that that's the way it was... OK, two ways to handle this:
1. Paint/Vector/Burn slight shadows and darken it just a tiny bit, especially on their skin.2. Make the moon brighter, give a little shine so it seems to illuminate the scene.
I would take option 2 but remember the clouds need to follow suit with the lighting..I quite love how you painted the clouds, it's so surreal and soft..
Only flaw in them is that they are a little too transparent around their skirts.. Maybe use another layer and paint them in? Presuming you're using Photoshop, I think one of your layers could be for wisps of clouds, meaning;
Use a brush with shape dynamics ( Fade 3-7 perhaps); Texture your brush if you want; Do some simple curvy lines; smudge so that it looks a little smoky.
Mind you, don't overdo it or they're be completely different from the natural clouds..A different font might be nice, something more classy but neat, and maybe floating amid a few layers of clouds.. ^^ It's up to you.
The petals add a rather nice touch to it, no need to change that!
Like princessmeyrin023 said, they do look floating.. But I can't see how to keep the clouds and put them on solid ground at the same time. LOL ^_^' Any ideas, the rest of you?
Oh, and I should tell you; I'm a fussy person when it comes to walls generally, so if it seems like I'm putting you down, I'm awfully, awfully sorry! You;re a great waller, keep up the good work! I'm on;y trying to give my opinion.. And everyone has their own style, you need not follow everything I say. I don't think anyone cleans scans like I do LOL..
see you!
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