Hi, I made a wallpaper of Saber (Fate/Stay Night) and feel like its something missing... but just don't know what @_@ I think that is a little childishe...(sorry, don't know how to write, my inglishe is a little bad)@_@_ well,sujestions will be very welcome \o/
thanks ^^
the image:
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c194/winry13/saber_room2.jpg
converted image back to a link due to size
Hey :)
I suggest making the clouds a bit more obvious, since they now look like a filter; also, since it's an after-the-rain
mood, making the Sun a bit dimmer would be good.
Next, try to think where the shadows would go. Since the Sun is in front of us, you should have a dark wall, photo (on
the wall) and teddy bear, with a bit of light on them. To see this, just put a toy near your window and see where the
shadows and highlights fall :)
And the grass - I think it would look better if you added a bush or a tree, just to have variation, and maybe have
different colored grass to avoid monotony.
Here are some tutorials that might be helpful: for the grass and for the clouds.
Good luck! :D I hope this advice was useful!
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the picyure is really beautiful! I just think if it could be a little blue sky out to like it's cracking up to better wether >_<
it's VERY pastel. it would appeal very much to a girl between the age of four and seven -- you might have felt this instinctively when you mentioned that it felt 'childish'.
perhaps you could try making it a little more dramatic? more intense colours from the sun outside, with long rosy shadows.
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