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j-valium deads dont talk

Hi, I don't speak english very much so...sorry for the possible mistakes ^^"
->I made a wall of Saber,from Fate/stay Night, but i still thinking that is not really good...i think that the sea is wrong, and the light is a little confusing, but if possible, i will apreciate a sugestion ^^
-> and the 'top' seens a little empty to me too i.i but dont know how i can fix it, its my 1st wall using this theme.

~~~> Saber [sunset] wall

kissus and thanks.

{Edit}

I fixed the image:

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c194/winry13/back2.jpg

hope that be better now.
kissus

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syaolong Sakura

Can't Speak English?Well Then,If You Chat With Me,You Can Speake Engilsh Right.^_<

lol

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freezen

you might like to do a ripple effect on the sun reflection?

about the light direction, according to sabre's shadow it's from the top right and there doesn't seem to be much coming from the left. however, your fence light direction seems to come from both left and right.

about the sky, i think i see 2 moons? 1 at the top and a half blocked one on her right elbow. personally i think it would looks better without the moon. the sky looks awesome enough :D

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