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Opinions/Advice for Sasuke Wallpaper

Breakman

Breakman

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I had an idea of Sasuke standing in the rain, his form reflecting in a pool of water, a city behind him burning to the ground due to the sheer force of his raiton chakra...but, I couldn't find the proper objects to execute it the way I had originally desired....

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2540/sasuke91209.th.jpg

The blue stuff on the 'water' (simulated by just adding a mess of indigo and obscene rippling + gaussian blur) is actually electricity, I couldn't find a better brush.

Any advice on how to improve it, so that this one DOESN'T get deleted like my other two...

To anyone that liked my work 'Memento Mori' and didn't get a chance to download it before MT downed it, I have it saved, so message me if you want it.

Kritty

Kritty

Meh... Just meh

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With the rain, try this tutorial. It'll help to make him look like hes in the rain instead of standing behind it.

The blue stuff which I can only assume is the water. I can see lines through it where you've tiled it.
And it doesn't look like water.

Whether it be chakra or fire, it should have a glow that you won't get just one layer with a premade brush.

The reflection is okay it just needs some free transformation, because sasuke should meet with his reflection at the feet. At the moment you have just fliped it vertically, resulting in making him look floating. Also in the reflection you should not be able to see the top of his feet. Have you ever stood in a puddle and seen the reflection of the top of your feet?

You should use a gradient instead of solid black in the BG.

The lightning climbing up sasuke is pixelated and blurry.

Do you know how to use the pen tool?
Look up some tuts on it.
A city scape in the BG won't be too hard to make with the pen tool seems it will be in the distance and un focused due to the rain.

I've written all this going on the assumtion that you use Photoshop.
Sorry if I sound harsh.
Nice concept though, keep trying

Breakman

Breakman

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I don't consider criticism harsh, especially when it could help me make my work better.
Thanks, I'll definitely try out your suggestions.

To anyone that liked my work 'Memento Mori' and didn't get a chance to download it before MT downed it, I have it saved, so message me if you want it.

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