weird12u

weird12u

Technician

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this is my rough draft @.@ i want it to be longer but i have a writers block like crazy!
since i want to portray light and dark differently, but until next time.. what do you guys think?

Cold Shivers are upon her body
Darkness overflows her drowning heart
Turning every smile on her dark
Soul empty, she carries on

Light flows through the cracks
Her empty heart is now seen
Killing herself she becomes clean
Blood pure for her sacrament

She wakes up in a unfound daze
Both light and dark are combined
All she needs is love intertwined
Would you be able to save her

The pure undead, she walks alone
To attack would be foolish
With her powers she’s ghoulish
She closed her mind from everyone

Can you break the lock?

Don't jack yourself on Jesus use someone else's hand!

NovaBomb

NovaBomb

People Contain Both Good & Evil

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so far its awesome, when your done with it i'm going to put a link in my signature to the finished poem, thank you very much *hugs* your amazing

"Light...Dark...Good...Evil...Yin...Yang...Truely they are but two sides of a single coin, a being contains both aspects and only by mastering both, can you truely become master of one's self" '2nd Squad Captain Tiaki Nova
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jasmint285

jasmint285

Merlin's Apprentice

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nice...can't wait to see the rest of it

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Being emotionally hurt is like having internal injury where the agonising pain kills you slowly without anyone knowing...and you can put on a brave front and smile at everyone around you to hide the fact that you're suffering...
Oh why did you have to do this to me?

miss-kittychan

miss-kittychan

Beginner Vectorer!

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This is really good, I get a really clear image in my mind of what the poem is portraying.
I'm looking forward to the fnished product =] x

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very nice...and bloody. I give it 9/10 (1 mark off because I dont know what inspired you to write it).

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