okay for me this is really short... but i see no reason to make it longer since i find it great as it is.. see look at the rhythmic plot inside of it... because my writing is more then words and i want people to honestly see how i work, and you people can't just understand it like i do
I shall keep my tears inside a jar
To one day show you how much pain
I have shed
I will show you the bruises on me
For you to see how im not as strong as I say
Heart full of dread
I will show you the slit wrists I have
For you to see yourself that
Blood is how you’re fed
Because you didn’t care for me then
And you won’t care now
Since now I lay here dead
