Demanding (poem)

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weird12u

weird12u

..waitin in the bushes for her..

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okay so i started this yesterday, and i plan on making another one written somewhat like this, but have a different feel to it.. it didn't take me long to make this but i did put some thought into.. honestly.. i am not quite sure what i wrote haha

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When you touched her body all she wanted was for it to end
She never loved you and never would
She just did what she could
And her excuse was survival, when I said she was a fool
You’re a sick pervert to joyfully cut into her skin
How you would spread her legs and force yourself in
If it were up to me I would of killed you long ago
One night she didn’t bother to go home
She would rather live on the streets alone
But you waited for her instead of going to work
She came back and you beat her face black and blue
She fell and just laid there without a clue
“You’re the dumbest bitch I know you dumb cunt
you’re the reason I drink and cry
you’re the reason I smoke and get high
You aint shit, I could kill you right now and no one would know”
She cried her apology begging you to quit
Crawled to you and pulled out your dick
“Baby, I know I am nothing without you, I will do anything
you ask me to show you I am sorry hun
don’t say because of this were done”
he just leans back and takes in her gift of pleasure
she knows what he likes her to do
he hates when she does anything new
days later you call her asking where she is
“I am with my friends we too the but to the other town,
were getting some shopping in before we go back down
to our area. I told you about this awhile back sweetie.”
“So you think these dishes will clean themselves whore?
You also have to clean the counter, walls, and floor.”
She gives up and starts to leave me for your selfish needs
I pick her up for work the next morning to see burises on her arm
And I turn red in anger with your time to change is up, this is my alarm
To end all of her torture and all your demanding bull shit
So I “kidnap” her from you so she can be free
There is a savage beast to kill you in me
You bust my door down and scream her name into the air
I drop down from the ceiling and push you to the ground
With the quickness I tape over your mouth for no sound
Then I see your devilish eyes and beat your face in
You push me off and pop out my shoulder
But this anger inside me I can’t hold much longer
Ignoring the pain I use my other arm and grab you by your hair
Pull your head down and you hit my knee
I push you to the wall, the start of my killing spree
Point the gun to your head and say “you deserve to die”
You beg for my forgiveness and I just laugh
“die mother fucker” then I pull back and cap
I took your life because you’re a sick individual
Never underestimate the love of a friend
Because I will protect them all till the end

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mick-klaassen

mick-klaassen

boredom is imminent to strike

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nice peom Cc

why?

  • Feb 25, 2010

InsomniacLord

InsomniacLord

?Immortality Is Loneliness?

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That's awesome!

Signature Image "Try to attack me! I do not sleep... Try to cut me! I feel no pain... Try to kill me! I have no fear... And don't take life too seriously. You'll never escape it alive anyway" ~Kazuma Fujiwara. The Lord Of Insomniacs.
Join the realms of SLEEPLESS PARADISE or i'll come and getchu!

  • Feb 25, 2010

Nekomimi12

Nekomimi12

Im just different

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O.O. . . wow. . . .thts really deep. . n i understood this one too

Join my rp group Karuma-Kingdom. . . . . n join other role playing groups like Sleepless Paradise n Vampire Lair
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  • Feb 25, 2010

XAngelKnight1913

XAngelKnight1913

Old Knight

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Powerful friendship.

The Insanity and The Possibilities
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  • Feb 25, 2010

UberDog

UberDog

Infinite Wubz...

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Some things are Universal!

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Kan-tastic

Kan-tastic

Grind.

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Geeze CC, enough with all the violent, man-hating....

I can't stay here with every single hope I had shattered...

  • Feb 26, 2010

UberDog

UberDog

Infinite Wubz...

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Again Kan just be glad she did not cut him open and eat his Heart...

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thts rely good cc ^^ very detailed 0.o lol
your writing is very vivid. detailed. do you plan on writing books?

weird12u

weird12u

..waitin in the bushes for her..

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Anime: I try to, but it never works out

Neil: STFU I am not a man hater, i am a man lover

Mimi: Well Aren't you just a cool kid? haha

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