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thx for everyone who comment
pls gif sum advice
http://yfrog.com/83katsurakotohanaj

belson

belson

Monitoring for your mom!

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pls remove the text! Its stealing attention and its annoying!

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I agree the text is not positioned in a way that is visually attractive... I would also like to say that the red kind of "stands out" too much and i would say that there is too much of it, but with some more reworking i think it could turn out well. what scan did you use?

belson

belson

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The red is stealing focus from kotohana, try to keep ur focal point in contrast. Pls Don't Make ME REPEAT AGAIN, DON'T PUT WORDS THAT DOES'NT MATCH THE WALLY!

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agree the text is not positioned

  • Jul 11, 2010

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