Hi everyone ^^
I'm still a begginer so I need your help, yoroshiku onegaii shimasu ^^
This is the first one
& this is the last one I made ^^
So... tell me what do you think of it? ^^
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Hi everyone ^^
I'm still a begginer so I need your help, yoroshiku onegaii shimasu ^^
This is the first one
& this is the last one I made ^^
So... tell me what do you think of it? ^^
Forget your Pain and Smile :)
For both wallpapers: you could remove the ghosting effect on it ( the bigger sized characters)
As for the first wallpaper: it seems like the characters were poorly extracted which was very obvious when you place that outer glow/stroke
As for the 2nd wallpaper. it's ok though both of them are overly brushed which isn't encouraged here in MT
in the first one you should definitely remove the glow effect around the characters because it sorta disconnects it with the rest of the wall. I also wouldn't encourage embossed font coz it also doesn't suite the wallie, try something a bit more serene so that you can portray the relationship better x)
maybe do some dodge and burning to enhance the lighting effect too
merged: 08-26-2010 ~ 04:52pm
try to make the words smaller too, it draw away attention. Use serene fonts like evanescence, or some italic fonts. The
words must be small and blend more to the background. The fonts u used looks like the ones used in comics, so it does
not fit.
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