As I Am (Poem)

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I removed it to prevent stealing~
Thank u all for the comments. :3

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evelluchia

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Lu-Lu the friendship officer

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how lovely ^-^ thank you for sharing such a beutifull poem^-^

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Emma93

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thats nice mechie!~ :3

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You'll alwaysRisewhen othersfall..
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ndox900

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ndeso forever ^_^

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very very awesome... :)

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koroyami

koroyami

Some Things You Never Forget . .

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.......
not that bad .....

Stay Where You Belong . . In My Memories . .

oxblackfairyxo

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Very nice, I like it. I would also like to share a poem that I wrote. It's a poem I wrote to my fiance to let him know how much I love him

You are my everything,
The air that I breath, the beat of my heart, the pulse in my veins.
You sustain me.
You are my blanket when I am cold, my sunshine, my light, my angel.
Like the stars in the sky at night, you guide me through the darkness.
My compass.
My hero, my savious, my protector. You are my life and love. You are mine
and I am yours forever.
I breath for you, cry for you, smile for you, live for you...die for you.
I would do anything for you because you are my life, my love, my happiness...
.....my everything

Falbare90

Falbare90

(=>益<=)

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beautiful words and great insperation thats 1 of many great poems i heard for a long time nice work mbeckly and oxblack it shows ur a great person and ur willing 2 show how u truely feal :D

merged: 09-15-2010 ~ 03:02pm
its very nice poems

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  • Sep 15, 2010

MisaSasekage

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War Queen

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Very nice.

Will I ever be able to escape this eternal living Hell, this endless cycle of being used, hurt and betrayed…? After all others had hated and abandoned me, he was the first to ever view me with only love and kindness in his eyes... He sees me for what I truly am... I love and will never abandon him... Our hearts will shine together... And break through the darkness and discord that is Eternity...

pheonix1992

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F@yt Lein@rk

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nice poem
(^_^)

"Taking things to another stage"

Miss-Mess

Miss-Mess

A hero, somtimes.

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Omg~ Lele this is Awesome :D.. Keep it up,I'm looking forward to read more poem from you!~

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Wow! Le-le i really like your poem. It's just awesome. !><

maic

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801-chan

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CUTE poem
good job ^^!

a true Hero is not measured by the strength of his muscles.. but by the power of his Heart

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Very pretty I like so much..

  • Oct 02, 2010
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Looks like I'm late :/

Damanex

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A Genius No Rule Can Contain!

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Poo, I wish I hadn't missed it if it was that good to remove it lol

"A thief is a creative artist who takes his prey in style, but a detective is nothing more than a critic who follows in our footsteps." -The Phantom Thief Kid
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cool do your best

  • Nov 22, 2010
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So likely.Thank you

  • Nov 23, 2010
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only the coment, no poem

  • Nov 29, 2010

DarkAlleyCat

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Mew! =3 ~DAC~

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Aw wanted to see what the original one was. =(
But at least there's one by blackfairy

A nicely written poem that expresses how much this person means to you, and what your devotion means. Great parallelism, mostly on the 2nd and 3rd to last lines. Also the metaphorical use in the 4th line is great. I'm not too great at analyzing poems as I'd like, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm a little unsure if you meant "savior" instead of "savious", but it might just be me.

I also got a couple of my own if you want to check that out. =)

http://forum.minitokyo.net/t69768

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DSHikaru

DSHikaru

countdown!

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aww.. i wanna read it.. :<

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aww.. i wanna read it.. :< [2]

  • Dec 14, 2010

SSJTrunkSH

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Hero of the Future !

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like it ....

Sekai ni Itami o !

Corvyie

Corvyie

Uh-huh.

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Very nice poems shared here so far.

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