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As I Am (Poem)

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I removed it to prevent stealing~
Thank u all for the comments. :3

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evelluchia

evelluchia

Lu-Lu the friendship officer

how lovely ^-^ thank you for sharing such a beutifull poem^-^

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Emma93

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thats nice mechie!~ :3

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ndox900

ndox900

ndeso forever ^_^

very very awesome... :)

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koroyami

koroyami

Some Things You Never Forget . .

.......
not that bad .....

Stay Where You Belong . . In My Memories . .

oxblackfairyxo

oxblackfairyxo

oxblackfairyxo

Very nice, I like it. I would also like to share a poem that I wrote. It's a poem I wrote to my fiance to let him know how much I love him

You are my everything,
The air that I breath, the beat of my heart, the pulse in my veins.
You sustain me.
You are my blanket when I am cold, my sunshine, my light, my angel.
Like the stars in the sky at night, you guide me through the darkness.
My compass.
My hero, my savious, my protector. You are my life and love. You are mine
and I am yours forever.
I breath for you, cry for you, smile for you, live for you...die for you.
I would do anything for you because you are my life, my love, my happiness...
.....my everything

Falbare90

Falbare90

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beautiful words and great insperation thats 1 of many great poems i heard for a long time nice work mbeckly and oxblack it shows ur a great person and ur willing 2 show how u truely feal :D

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its very nice poems

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MisaSasekage

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MisaSasekage

War Queen

Very nice.

pheonix1992

pheonix1992

F@yt Lein@rk

nice poem
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"Taking things to another stage"

Miss-Mess

Miss-Mess

A hero, somtimes.

Omg~ Lele this is Awesome :D.. Keep it up,I'm looking forward to read more poem from you!~

Wow! Le-le i really like your poem. It's just awesome. !><

maic

maic

801-chan

CUTE poem
good job ^^!

a true Hero is not measured by the strength of his muscles.. but by the power of his Heart

Very pretty I like so much..

Looks like I'm late :/

Damanex

Damanex

A Genius No Rule Can Contain!

Poo, I wish I hadn't missed it if it was that good to remove it lol

"A thief is a creative artist who takes his prey in style, but a detective is nothing more than a critic who follows in our footsteps." -The Phantom Thief Kid
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cool do your best

So likely.Thank you

only the coment, no poem

DarkAlleyCat

DarkAlleyCat

Mew! =3 ~DAC~

Aw wanted to see what the original one was. =(
But at least there's one by blackfairy

A nicely written poem that expresses how much this person means to you, and what your devotion means. Great parallelism, mostly on the 2nd and 3rd to last lines. Also the metaphorical use in the 4th line is great. I'm not too great at analyzing poems as I'd like, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm a little unsure if you meant "savior" instead of "savious", but it might just be me.

I also got a couple of my own if you want to check that out. =)

http://forum.minitokyo.net/t69768

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DSHikaru

DSHikaru

countdown!

aww.. i wanna read it.. :<

aww.. i wanna read it.. :< [2]

SSJTrunkSH

SSJTrunkSH

Hero of the Future !

like it ....

Sekai ni Itami o !

Corvyie

Corvyie

Uh-huh.

Very nice poems shared here so far.

Actions speak louder than words and words speak louder than thoughts.

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