Please look this thing over :)

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Hi. :)

I've got a request. Could you guys please check this thing out and point out any problem areas it has?
I want to be sure it's good before uploading it.

http://i968.photobucket.com/albums/ae168/NonadaMouse/Wallpapers/th_destroyersart.jpg?t=1295076460
It's here, by the way.

srsn

srsn

anime marathon!

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This has a nice concept and theme. One thing that I think needs more work is the fire in lelouch's hand. Try making it sharper at the tips like pointy

more like what I did in here ( I mean the pointy tips)
The Day the Flame was Born by srsn
The Day the Flame was Born by srsn though it's not that perfect
You can also fix the signature since it's too high and kinda big

That's my 2 cents ^^

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DSHikaru

DSHikaru

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i agree with srsn. the flame should be bigger and pointier so that it has the feel :3

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You all were right; the flames were too soft to complement him. How does this look? http://i968.photobucket.com/albums/ae168/NonadaMouse/Wallpapers/th_destroyersart2.jpg?t=1296724572
Click the preview if you want to see the full-sized image. :)

srsn

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This is much better, but your signature is still kinda high and not that visible. Kindly make it lower and stand out

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Thank you very much for the suggestions. They helped me out. :)

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