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need advice about a indy art

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Hi
I would like to ask is this Indy Art its good for submit?

http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/3142/kanouso2.th.jpg

(the original size of this indy art its 1400x2000)

I scanned this image and I painted (its the firt time I do this.=D).

thank you for your time. ;)

Aoki Kotomi Fan <3

Hmmm... as long as when you submit it's all big and nice I think it'll be fine :D
My only complaint is that it cuts off the bottom of her food and the edge of her hair :( oh wells though. Other than that great work! :D

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The thumbnail image is fairly small, but from what I can tell your colorization looks okay? I would prefer if you'd link to the full-size image so I could check your linework. ^_^

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Hey, awesome work you've got here. :)

Yes, I would go with duhqueenmoki's 'complaint' too. I think it would be nice to see the 'whole' of her without any parts 'chipped off' no matter how minor it would look.

But it's good to go, as long as you upload the full high-res version of the image so we can ensure a high quality artwork. Your progress is really good so far, so just keep it up. ^_^

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ok, thanks. ;)

this is the full-size version:

http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/6773/kanouso.th.png

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fireflywishes

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Your lines look a little rough. I would try and make them more smooth.

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Quote by fireflywishesYour lines look a little rough. I would try and make them more smooth.

thanks for your advice.

like this don't make much difference, right?

http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/6607/semttulo3l.th.jpg

I'll try some other method.

merged: 04-28-2011 ~ 08:19pm
I made this version of the indy art, and I wanted to ask if its too simple. :/


1920x1200:

http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/4802/kwall1.th.jpg


1600x1200:

http://img860.imageshack.us/img860/6231/kwall3.th.jpg


I was inspireted by this photo:

http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/2666/1005241.th.jpg


thanks =D

Aoki Kotomi Fan <3

I think a good idea is, if you're trying to replicate the picture on the shirt, is to add her shadow in there. Also, since part of her head was cut off, when you added her to the text, you had to hide the part missing with the "O" from "DO", the head part actually looks fine, but her arm in the O looks odd.

I think the only way you would be able to fix the awkwardness of the arm is to either 1) put the entire O in "DO" in front of her or 2) redraw the missing part of her hair and shoulder and put her in front of the O in "DO". It can't be part of her behind the O and part of her in front, it looks a little odd.

I can see where it'd get frustrating and whatnot but don't give up! :D And if worse comes to worse I'm sure you could always ask someone in the art section of the forum if they can redraw it for you.

Oh and the indy art lines did improve a little, I could see it, so good job on that :) however they could still be a tad smoother.

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I think you're off to a great start. :3 You've cleaned up the lineart a lot, she looks almost vectored now.

As duhqueenmoki has said, the arm in the 'O' does look a bit odd.. It would be great if you could redraw her shoulder and arm in, and the hair too.. If you have Photoshop, you can use the pen tool and vector it in, it's handy for reconstructing. That's what I used to use. :)
If you find that too hard.. I could do it for you.. :x

I like version 1 better, since the text is given more space to 'breathe'. I like your colour scheme too!
The pink shape is a bit too distracting though from the text, which is a slight pity because the play with text is so sweet. I think you're trying to make it look like a shirt? I think it would be better to leave it as a blank bg, or with a gradient, then add little elements like faint signs, bubbles, stickers, stripes or etc. A mic or megaphone would be awesome though but that's just an idea. ^^; You can search for vector brushes for those...

But overall, nice work. d(^_^)b

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Thanks so much for the advices. =D
I'll try making something... and if I need any help vectoring I'll ask. ;)
thanks so much again to duhqueenmoki and aozoraskies. <3

Aoki Kotomi Fan <3

You're very welcome ^-^

I just finish and this is the result:

1920x1200:

http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/4802/kwall1.th.jpg


1600x1200:

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/6231/kwall3.th.jpg

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aozoraskies

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aozoraskies

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The reconstructed bits are smooth. :3
Silly of me but I kinda like that she's stomping on the stop sign for 'Do not sing'. XD like, "Pshaw, who cares about your rules" lol

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It looks really nice^^

thanks for the help again. ;)
I'll submit this work. =D

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