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http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c197/firzened/th_pvz.jpg

it's more or less completed but i'm a bit stuck on the part that has the words 'stairway to heaven'. somehow i'm not very comfortable with the colours but i have no idea what to change it into. alternatively, i could take it out but that space will be kinda empty so i'm not sure what else to do with it :/ also, do the vines look okay in the picture? dunno if it's too random :/ cause i wanted something to come out from the unicorn so i just kinda added it in.

but just overall, what should i do to the wallpaper?

many thanks in advance ;D

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I think it's very cute and and a nice wall. (And I'm not just saying that because I love Plants vs. Zombies) the vines are a neat idea, but I think they cover up the words too much and make it too cluttered and hard to read. I think the wall would be lovely without the vines over the words. That's my only real suggestion. Keep up the good work! :)

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I like the wallpaper, but you could create one and add the text and compare the two and see what/which one you might think is better. sometimes text on a wall makes the picture or break it. but the vines do cover up the words and the words are cut off on the very end so they aren't all in the picture anyways. you could work with the words, remove them, add another font, lighten the vines or darken the words, but those are just my opinion/suggestion hope they help some

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Awww XD so cute! Going along with snickerdoodleninja, I think the black swirly brush coming out of the unicorn's hoof is unnecessary and it covers the text too much :D Also, since your wally has a bit of a fun and optimistic theme to it, anything black would seem odd.

I actually like the font the way it is and the texture of it is nice as well. <3

So yes, the only thing off is the black swirly vine brush. It should either be made a different color and slightly transparrent OR replaced by a less complicated brush that still has the same effect (because the detail of the brush you used clashes with the lack of complexity of the other things going on, which are all cute).

josephine12cute

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Woot! Its peashooter! XD XD XD

I like the wallpaper and the typo-color burst going on around there. Although the black vine is what's disturbing me. I have a few suggestions: you can use a different kind of vine (floral is too detailed to me used for the wall), you can do a plant typography (where the vines wrap up the letters like in this one) or you can do different variations and compare until you see what you like the best...

Hope I helped :D
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thanks for the suggestions :D

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c197/firzened/th_pvz-1.jpg

is this better? should i rid the all your rainbows are belong to us?

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Peashooter <3 I think the text is fine, though the nitpicker in me says there shouldn't be an 'are'. XD (You don't need to listen to the nitpicker :P)

Also, are you using two vine brushes? It looks like it. Erm, use the curly one only, or at least stick to the same type.. The 'thinner' vine brush is a bit distracting, imho.
Still, I nom this colourful wall and its cute concept. :3

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Instead of saying "all your rainbows are belong to us" just say "all your rainbows belongs to us!" seems a little better but same effect :D Great job otherwise though! You know I liked that font "stairway to heaven" in your first version cuz it blended with the rainbow more, so maybe you could upload that one as an alt. version? :D pretty please? Great wally! ^-^

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wall submitted here: Puking sunshines, rainbows, and sparklies. And a unicorn. by freezen
Puking sunshines, rainbows, and sparklies. And a unicorn. by freezen

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