Bang wallpaper

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I was bored, and decided to try and get back into wallpapers.

Did the bg with some brushes, Then found some photography of snowy moutains and whatnot, and added it into it for some texture, and just for the cool effect.

Character: http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww118/Drez_Explosion/Banglargeandrecolored.png

Had to use a recolored image, all his normal pictures were too small, But I just ended up recoloring the recolored picture Lol.

but yea, anything wrong besides the file format, and the odd border which I'll fix later.

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/5984/bangwallpaper.th.png

Bernouli

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The text at the bottom might be a bit much..

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SolemnSerpent

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I agree with Bernouli, this would look a lot better without the invasive text; it attracts attention away from the rest of the wallpaper. Otherwise, it's a decent wallpaper; the sepia tone works well for this.

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Yup, the text is a tad bit too much, but other than that it's great! :D Great job on it. Also, you may want to try adding some lighting affects :D It looks like there's a light source coming from behind the character so maybe fool around with some lighting to make it look cool? But you don't have to of course, the wally is pretty good as it is :)

Alenas

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Lol, 'the Hammer of Justice' reminded me of Cy immediately. XD

It does look pretty good so far but as others had stated, the text could be either removed or if you wish to keep it, try incorporating it differently into the wall - maybe try dividing it on each side of the character in the middle and make it more subtle by playing with blending modes. Keep it up! :3

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ai-yame

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Your wallpaper's good as it is; you'll just have to do something about the text. Try incorporating it into the wallpaper as the others have mentioned already; be it through the color, lighting, texture, etc. And maybe use a different font; cursive fonts won't work with the hunk in your wallie.

You can do it! :D

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Alrighty, well here is an update, I removed the text, and added new characters to his nail, as well as playing with the shadows.

I also, played a bit more with gradients, and made it look more...fiery you could say, I always added coloring to the eyes of the characters on his nail.

http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/6669/bangwallpaper.th.jpg


Last thing I might do is play with the lighting some more, to get something more dramatic, unless thats all that should be done.

Alenas

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Alenas

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Oh, I like the improvements you did - the colors match the fierceness of it all better and the girl's expression in the sword adds that little extra something to it. I think there's nothing major to critic anymore so yeah, I'd say thumbs up! :)

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SolemnSerpent

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This looks a lot better. I like the addition of the new faces on the sword, especially the added colors of their eyes and material around his neck- makes this much more interesting. I have no other critiques to add; nice work.

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evelluchia

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i like your idea and it does show alot of promis though the text is nice its a little hard to read (for me maybe) i do look forword to seeing you compleate work

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ai-yame

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Definitely better this time! The adding of new faces on the nail was a pretty good move. As for making it more dramatic, there's this sepia-ish look about it already, so your wallie should be fine now. Looking forward to seeing this in the gallery soon! :D

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