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Previous sketches: 1 -(topic about it) - 2 (topic about it)

First of all thanks to everyone gave me suggestions/impressions until now!
And so...after another month (I'm so slooooow) I came up with this final version of my sketch: click me!
Yah, I changed a lot of things, again XD
But this time I'm pretty happy about the final result, and I opened this thread to ask you if there is something I should absolutly change, or if it'll be okey like this (before I start to color it).

Please before to ask something anyway, give a quickly look to the previous topics, in order to understand which changes I did from the first WIP to this one :)

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This is probably one of the biggest transformations I've seen of a WIP here on MT. I mean that in a very good way too.

I have to say, with looking at everything that's been done, I can't really add any more suggestions for your sketch. As of right now, everything looks fantastic. I really love not only the changes you made to the scenery, but to the mermaid as well. It's full of life, and I can only imagine the amount of color it will have as well.

I'd honestly say go full force ahead. It looks stunning!

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Really thanks Cyan for your support! >.< really!

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hitsu-chan K-PoP AdDicTioN <3

OMG! :O all your sketches were amazing! >.<
first, I love all the mermaids you drew (^.^)b they are all gorgeous :3 (I prefer the second one ♥)
second, your final background is the best one x) the details are great and the fishes are well scattered, it feels like you can see all the wonders of the sea :3 lol.
my only problem is... the mermaid's fin... (in English we don't say tail, do we? ^^') it seems... too ... high? :S it sure is a bit.. odd ^^' I think it'd look better if you place it a bit down to the right xD maybe not to the right but down for sure :) (or maybe it's just my eyes :P) anyway, you can try it and you'll see if it's better or not ^.^
that's all =^^= it's really wonderful! I'm looking forward to it! I'm sure it'll be AWESOME! :D go for it Raffa! \(^.^\)

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First of all, thanks for the compliments hitsu :3
About the fin/tail (really i don't know which is more correct XD) I can understand which is the matter...but part of the problem can result from the fact that it is a sketch...the tail's lines are a little confused, but I'm pretty sure that the perspective is right >.<
However when I'll start to color it and to made it more "claer" I'll try to put a little down tha tail...:)

Thanks again for support!

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tsuyutsuki The comeback (?)

I'm glad to say your second sketch has already become my wallpaper, but I'll be looking forward to the final version~
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? o.o how can you use the second sketch like a wall? it's totally a mess XD

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Hahahaha, I liked it! It's messy, but I liked the feelin'~ ˆ3ˆ

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hitsu-chan K-PoP AdDicTioN <3

Quote by Raffachan First of all, thanks for the compliments hitsu :3
About the fin/tail (really i don't know which is more correct XD) I can understand which is the matter...but part of the problem can result from the fact that it is a sketch...the tail's lines are a little confused, but I'm pretty sure that the perspective is right >.<
However when I'll start to color it and to made it more "claer" I'll try to put a little down tha tail...:)

Thanks again for support!

you're welcome, you're welcome =^^=
oooh, I see... your perspective is definitely right, I know ^_^ it's just that the tail should be a bit.. more... down :)
good luck! (^.^)b

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@tsuki: lol okey XD if you like it...:3
@hitsu: ok..how I wrote before, I'll try to put the tail a little more down :3

Okey people, if there isn't someone else who wants to give suggestions about this final sketch, I'll start to colour it soon oo

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