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I feel annoying since I'm posting on here for the 3rd time (don't ask why, it's just how I roll) but I am honestly completely unsure of this wallpaper. Plus I don't want to have a 3rd strike so I'm being extra careful.

Here's the wallpaper:
http://fav.me/d51c3da

sources:
brush I used for the blood:
http://fav.me/dbwam4
Page I used (not sure what chapter it's from or page):
http://i1030.photobucket.com/albums/y363/TC-Disasteress/karin-521500.jpg
The brick Wall:
http://www.veezzle.com/photo/1182291/brick-wall-3
The glass cracks:
http://fav.me/d2xp7gp

extra notes: I am also not sure of the glass cracks if I should have kept them or not...

I'm gon' be straight with yall. I ain't coming back here.

UberDog

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Does she have some sort of Gravity Defying hair spray on or what? The hair looks off in my opinion. Like it is reaching toward the heavens for some sort of help.
Other than that it seem pretty good. ^.^

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Gone.

I notice some quality issues on the character (jpeg artifacts and pixelation) but I'm not sure if that's just dA's compression or the real state of the quality. But the main problem is the background - it looks too realistic and 3D compared to the vectored character (at least it looks vectored to me); if you vectored and colored the character, you should do the same to the background, as well because right now, they all clash too much. And use something else for that floor besides the PS filter because it really looks too generic and out of place, just like the broken glass brushes.

Maybe you could choose another setting, too instead of the spotlight one, some kind of play with grunge brushes and textures that would perhaps better convey the feeling if it all. Right now, this looks like a scene out of some drama on stage, lol. Well, just my two cents. :)

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Bye Bitch

Quote by alenasI notice some quality issues on the character (jpeg artifacts and pixelation) but I'm not sure if that's just dA's compression or the real state of the quality. But the main problem is the background - it looks too realistic and 3D compared to the vectored character (at least it looks vectored to me); if you vectored and colored the character, you should do the same to the background, as well because right now, they all clash too much. And use something else for that floor besides the PS filter because it really looks too generic and out of place, just like the broken glass brushes.

Maybe you could choose another setting, too instead of the spotlight one, some kind of play with grunge brushes and textures that would perhaps better convey the feeling if it all. Right now, this looks like a scene out of some drama on stage, lol. Well, just my two cents. :)

well in the original version I had I had a vectored background as well, but the floor was really off D:
But yeah you pretty much summarized all the reasons I had doubt in it.


merged: 06-19-2012 ~ 05:33am

Quote by UberDogDoes she have some sort of Gravity Defying hair spray on or what? The hair looks off in my opinion. Like it is reaching toward the heavens for some sort of help.
Other than that it seem pretty good. ^.^

yeah I kind of noticed that too D:

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Drakill

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I looks good except for like Uberdog said "The hair looks off in my opinion". And I'd suggest maybe a shadow under her. It looks a bit off as well. But, just a suggestion.

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