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okay im not too good at html, but ill get better. As for now heres the link to the photo:

http://s1299.photobucket.com/user/rotten180/media/IMG_0137_zpsccf87c95.jpg.html?sort=3&o=0

ya so this art thing i made is from dream eater merry(i dont watch it, i just found it and drew), so i was thinking of making it look like a bunch of papers are strewn out and somehow there is this picture on it. So ya i posted this to see how i can improve on it, obviously i should outline the girl first, i want more to it so how should i? thank you for the help!

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joey101

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Its pretty..your a good drawer..i cant draw..hmm she looks fine...maybe her hair

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Just a reminder...if you were planning to upload this to the gallery, we do not accept things drawn on lined paper and it needs to be scanned.

Aside from that, i think it looks quite good. Was your intent for her legs and left arm to be unfinished?

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Quote by fireflywishesJust a reminder...if you were planning to upload this to the gallery, we do not accept things drawn on lined paper and it needs to be scanned.

Aside from that, i think it looks quite good. Was your intent for her legs and left arm to be unfinished?

yes i was intending for this like one of those drawings that were just found on paper but not completed. Btw thanks for the heads up on needing to scan it

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It is quite good...so your good in drawing...you have the potential and hope you improve more.

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Quote by happytail73It is quite good...so your good in drawing...you have the potential and hope you improve more.

Thank you! :-) ya the problem though is that each drawing takes a long time for me

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Well, it looks quite good. ^^,
Hm, I think you need to shade the skirt. Then, try to give the effect of reflected light received by the eye and the pupils. :)

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About your work it looks pretty good but some edges and parts you don't draw well like her elbow of right hand looks rectangular rather than triangular and her abdomen looks flat because bodies of girls looks like 8 because of their breast and lower waist to hips are fatty than their abdomen.Therefor I link you some scan so, you can understand easily.
Here's the link http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/623336 and http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/620709
Keep it up Your good work^^

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Quote by Blue-LatteWell, it looks quite good. ^^,
Hm, I think you need to shade the skirt. Then, try to give the effect of reflected light received by the eye and the pupils. :)

Yah its still in progress, but thanks for the suggestions, I'll see what I can do

Quote by ShubhamAbout your work it looks pretty good but some edges and parts you don't draw well like her elbow of right hand looks rectangular rather than triangular and her abdomen looks flat because bodies of girls looks like 8 because of their breast and lower waist to hips are fatty than their abdomen.Therefor I link you some scan so, you can understand easily.
Here's the link http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/623336 and http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/620709
Keep it up Your good work^^

Oh okay thank you, yah I really did not know any methods, I just draw :P , but thanks I'll try improving on those aspects in the future

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well you could try give her some curve for her body (hip, elbow & her leg) no need to make it look sexy since it Merry after all... but curve needed to make the girl look soft so~just go take a look in swimsuit tag that should give you the general ideas

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Quote by Shiknifulwell you could try give her some curve for her body (hip, elbow & her leg) no need to make it look sexy since it Merry after all... but curve needed to make the girl look soft so~just go take a look in swimsuit tag that should give you the general ideas

Thanks for the suggestion! ya and i like the suggestion too on my guestbook! :)

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