Good afternoon everyone!

Tagged under Digimon Adventure

page 1 of 1 19 total items

sidneythor

sidneythor

Enchento Supiritto Eboryūshon!

Cancel

Good afternoon everyone!
I wonder if it would be possible I post the following image:
http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2013/221/7/1/tai_kamiya_by_sidneythor-d6hd0ss.png
This same image I had posted it on the site which is the best known DeviantART I posted it and I would like to post it on this site if possible?
For I had made a drawing of the main protagonist of Digimon Adventure, Tai Kamiya who is considered the leader of all the first generation DigiDestined and without comment that he is one of my favorite characters in the series!
I drew the design side and I took the picture that I had based.
I hope you like it and I can post it here on Minitokyo.
Thank you for your attention and have a great afternoon!

Signature Image

  • Sep 25, 2013

Monu-chan

Moderator

Monu-chan

Out of Reach

Cancel

Hi^^
First of all you need to improve your drawing skills you need to draw tai's hair a little bigger and try to make it spicky in appearance then his eyes you need to make it a little bigger and detailed in appearance then the signature of DG destined's leader his goggles in a good shape after you dothis try to make it a little slimmer he looks fatty and more look like Haruyuki from Accel World and a lot of shading
If you are unable to shade your draw good then try to create the out lines neat, sharp, clear.
If you want many favs then please try to improve your artwork.
Thanks for reading my comment!

As the Light begins to intensify, so does my misery,
and I wonder how it is possible to hurt so much when nothing is wrong.
Signature Image

akiranyo

akiranyo

Astraea Kisaragi

Cancel

Altough hand drawn stuff is usually isn't taken here so strict as digital art is, but I think is pretty far from being called impressive. As the person above me mentioned, he nowhere looks close to Tai at all. Digimon human characters used be very skinny with big hands and foot, but yours is now a fatso :P Also I'm not sure why his hair is cropped? Unlike digital art you aren't limited with pixels, just by the edges of the paper. I simply don't get why you didn't extended it, is just one piece of hair, it takes two lines. If he is your favorite character, you should know him from top of his head, nope?

The constant bashing of my ecchi art and my haters formed me to what I am now - a full fledged hentai artist.
Signature
	Image

sidneythor

sidneythor

Enchento Supiritto Eboryūshon!

Cancel

I know I have to improve a lot but unfortunately I'm not good at drawing head and hair so it got that way and body fat was why the original image was a small image that beside my drawing I had to expand because I had done the drawing looking trough a cell and observing the cell design is already half hard and I know I have to redo it until meso head to his waist I think I also have to do the hand also why I think the gloves were a little crooked!
But I do not design to be a known artist I simply drawing for pleasure such as this other drawing I made ​​myself so that is another anime I'm going to show you guys how it went:
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/194/4/2/goku_long_by_sidneythor-d6d9okf.jpg
This was a drawing I made to be a joke I had in mind!

Well thanks for the advice of you before I start posting here I will return when I have 100% perfect designs that I think will be in 10 years or so!

Signature Image

  • Sep 25, 2013

akiranyo

akiranyo

Astraea Kisaragi

Cancel

I don't want to discourage, but if you would have not the names on the pictures I would not recognize who they are :P
Drawing good hair is important mainly by female characters, but I think you should first aim at improving yourself in character anatomy. Even by hand drawing, many anime artists use guidelines to help them with the proper proportions of the characters. There are multiple tutorials on Youtube, you might check them out. As far I myself always focused on digital art, pencil is really not my strenght, so I cannot give any advanced tips myself.

The constant bashing of my ecchi art and my haters formed me to what I am now - a full fledged hentai artist.
Signature
	Image

Valuna

Retired Moderator

Valuna

Naughty Artist

Cancel

Haha, aki...let me help with that.
When it comes to hand-drawn art. The only thing you need is paper, pencil, eraser and everyday practice. If you can't get the proportions right, you might want to try raster drawing. It is drawing by making a raster on the original picture, then copying it block by block on your own piece of paper. It does help in making a good redrawn picture. If you got it down a bit, you can try drawing the way you are now drawing. Eventually, you will get an eye for it. Well, you can also start by copying faces with the basics. A cricle, two lines and then you make the hair/face(look on the internet for basics drawing heads). It works well when you have trouble with doing so.

A second option is, one with less results at the start but works out well later and actually more suggested because you can develop bad drawing habits. Look at the basics, the doll, face, gestures, practice practice and practice until you get the hang of making it all anatomical right. It takes a lot because you won't be doing much more than drawing dolls. Surely, you can make a character from it. I think this is more the basics of advanced drawing...so stick with the first one.

Whatever you choose, good luck. It is a never-ending practice and it takes a lot of time and determination like many other things. If you practice a lot, you can make quite some improvements with a year. Oh...and be nice for yourself but also harsh when judging your own drawings. Remember, we all aim for perfection in this. You need to learn what is acceptible for yourself and what is not. The eye of an artist, that is. Drawing properly is a basic thing, even if you can't, you need to know how it should be done properly.

These beautiful, fragile days are reborn, unfaded
Signature
	Image

sidneythor

sidneythor

Enchento Supiritto Eboryūshon!

Cancel

I understand what you guys are trying to tell me but unfortunately I'm not very good at drawing so I design for fun and sometimes gets a little bad but I promise you that taking that design and some others I did the same hand I will disclose here for that you guys can evaluate and see if they were really good ok!
Thank you but I draw it is during school schedules in vacant or when the class is boring even I start drawing!
The problem is that even if I start using the lessons that have videos on the internet will not be the same thing I'm more the type to go wrong drawing and learning to make sure that way as much as you err someday you will get it right!
But in my point of view even for an amateur designer like me, I believe that my design was very good in my view.
But in the view of others is clear that any kind of drawing I do will get bad.
For most it was a designer exelente someone surely would find some error in my drawings.
Thanks for the opnion of you all and even though I can not post my picture on this site I will continue to post in devianart so it is disclosed and also other people know about my work.

Signature Image

  • Sep 26, 2013

Valuna

Retired Moderator

Valuna

Naughty Artist

Cancel

You are making a mistake. As you aren't so good yourself..obviously your better works are good for you. They are also good for people that don't draw themselves. Thing is, on minitokyo. Many of us are on or near a proffesional level Asking us is like applying for a university. There are standards and the standards are pretty high.

I understand that you draw here and there but you must also aim for perfection. Draw to get better, be harsh on yourself and such. Drawing is fun, who doesnt do it for fun...but yeah, gotta improve and do more your best to become good. I don't want to be harsh on you, but in the eyes of an advanced artist...you are...quite bad. Come back when you can make good original drawings and/or are capable of copying existing works nearly perfectly along with good shading. Otherwise, I don't think you are ready yet. Good luck either way, hope you will come back to submit soon and uhm...stay here to download/enjoy/critic other's work. It will do you good to understand what we are talking about here.

These beautiful, fragile days are reborn, unfaded
Signature
	Image

CyanideBlizzard

Retired Moderator

CyanideBlizzard

Margarita Time!

Cancel

As a former staff member, I'll see if I can't also offer a bit of critique.

While Minitokyo accepts every and all images, there are individuals who are in charge of different sections that go through new submissions and delete ones that don't meet the standards. Like Valuna stated, Minitokyo runs on a level of standard and basis. While, generally speaking, the website tries to be understanding and accept members who are new to the field it isn't always the case. In the past decade I've been on this website, I've watched the standards gradually get higher and higher for pieces to be accepted. Heck, even a few years back there was a great deal of gallery items deleted because they no longer met the standards that Minitokyo had.

We encourage anyone, both professional and those that do it for fun, to participate. However, to be completely blunt your level of drawing is a novice. There's huge proportional problems, no level of depth, and a lot of drawing basics aren't applied. I apologize if this sounds cruel, but if you get a chance check out the Indy Art section of Minitokyo. There's a wide variety of talent in there, and Minitokyo has always been looking for more people to submit their works. Especially when it comes to hand drawn pieces!

This Sandbox is perfect for just that. You are more than welcome to continue to submit your work for critique, suggestions, or anything else that you may need and we'll do our best to offer you good and honest advice to help you improve.

I hope you'll continue to work hard and that someday we'll see your work in the gallery!

Signature Image

  • Sep 26, 2013

Darthas

Retired Moderator

Darthas

レキシコン

Cancel

Quote by sidneythor
Well thanks for the advice of you before I start posting here I will return when I have 100% perfect designs that I think will be in 10 years or so!

Sup, I read and understood everything you've been saying up to this point, but unfortunately can't sympathize with you at all. You are missing the point everyone is trying to make. This community does not benefit from your improvements, only you do. You are the one who benefits from critical feedback since it will be your work, not ours, that becomes better on an overall. I would believe you at least would want to strive to attain that.

You mentioned being an amateur and that what you did was good enough in your view, we agree with you. But despite what you want, we, the community, will not want to see you as an amateur forever. Hence why feedback was less what you expected it to be.

Keep in mind this is the sandbox, where people who want to improve to the best of their ability come to post their works to gather CRITICAL feedback that helps them realize mistakes they would not normally see themselves. If I could link you past threads where certain other members kept re-posting their drawings to gather more and more feedback, I would give you that example to look at since that would be an accurate display of just how dedicated people would be, and it is not to say they were not having fun doing it.

We understand you draw for fun, we understand that you want to share it with as many people as possible, but I would believe as an artist, you would want to be able to post some of the most impressive drawings that gather the best possible outcomes for yourself - which can only be obtained by exceeding any standard put before you. All I see right now is you saying standards are too high and that we require perfection. That is a poor assessment of anything said thus far, as mentioned before, you will basically just benefit yourself in the long run.

No matter what path you choose to take, we hope to see you soon. 10 years is a long time.

[20:54] Lexicon: I may be 3rd place in the popularity poll but at NASA, the # order is 3>2>1.
[20:56] DXBlair: its a placement poll..not a countdown idiot
[SIG design by Valuna]
Signature
	Image

sidneythor

sidneythor

Enchento Supiritto Eboryūshon!

Cancel

I'll take this topic that I made ​​myself and show one of my last jobs I did recently because these drawings that I showed you guys I did four months ago so I'm going to seize the opportunity and would like to show my last job but I really do not know if will have been good:
but here goes hope you like it but I do not put my signature on my drawing because I do not have this custom that those who want to pick up my drawings and reuses them I would be very grateful here it goes:
http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/2363/r1zl.jpg
This was the last drawing I did but I will not publish it for what remains coloring and everything!

Signature Image

  • Sep 27, 2013

fireflywishes

Retired Moderator, Linguistics

fireflywishes

Calgon, take me away~!

Cancel

Wow, look at the improvement in just 4 months!

I do wish that it were a cleaner scan... and with a bit more finishing work (shading mainly) on the coat, this could be a viable first submission to MT!

I look forward to seeing the finished product. :)

Signature Image

sidneythor

sidneythor

Enchento Supiritto Eboryūshon!

Cancel

Good Afternoon or better Good Night!
Well I'm here to say that I posted some new drawings I made this site here:
http://sidneythor.deviantart.com/gallery/
if you guys want it just interressar access and already I saying I apologize if the angles of the photos are not 100% perfect for you guys can also view and image clarity ok!
And once again I'm not putting credit so I hope you do not stay thinking I got the drawings of other people and posted it is mintira I did these drawings and here are they in my house and I can prove it if you guys want making a video ok!
But I really hope not criticize my drawings because I'm a designer to design an amateur I draw for fun ok then thanks for the attention of you and it can leave any comment even those owning account ok!
Thank you for your attention and I hope you have an awesome day and even more!
Observation: For those who do not have an account on this site can comment here or criticize it ok!
Just copy the link of the photo and tell me what is wrong or what needs to be improved ok!
I appreciate the attention and patience of all ok until more!

Signature Image

  • Oct 08, 2013

pandemonium91

Retired Moderator, Tagger

pandemonium91

Lazy af

Cancel

You keep bringing up the point that you're an amateur and that you draw for fun. Unfortunately, you almost use it as an excuse and a way of saying our standards are impossible to reach. In the beginning, MT did allow more doodle-like (because like it or not, that's the current level of your works, from our point of view) drawings, but standards and expectations evolve over time as people get better. Cy and Darthas are right, lots of works were deleted because they were just stuff people drew without a lot of attention to anatomy or shading; now we're past that point, and do not accept such images anymore. Again, aside from the fact that your drawings are photographed (another big no-no, fan art should be scanned!), they are extremely simplistic, and not the good kind either.

I am by no means trying to insult you or pick on you. No one started out extremely talented, they learned and practiced their way to the top. We encourage those who want to improve themselves, but they also have to meet minimum requirements in order to make it into the gallery. If you feel (and you've been told) that your works aren't quite there yet, keep posting in the Sandbox (make a thread for your stuff) and ask for feedback. You'll see that experienced members will gladly give you feedback and direct you to various tutorials to improve the areas you're lacking in. However, if you respond to honest criticism with snark, don't expect to be greeted with open arms.

Others have brought up the point that MT has certain standards. Yes, it does, no one can deny it. You have standards too, of course. IMO, this is just a case where these don't overlap; we expect something from the people who submit stuff here, you don't necessarily agree with our expectations. It's obvious I won't change the way you think or the other way around, so I wish you the best in the future. If you are happy with your art as it is now, more power to you. However, we are not, for reasons that have been mentioned above. If you want to be accepted into the MT gallery, I'd suggest to try and improve your skills. If that's not what you want, then I wish you good luck and hope you will keep drawing as you like and find a place where your skills are appreciated as you want :)

sidneythor

sidneythor

Enchento Supiritto Eboryūshon!

Cancel

I understood What do you mean and thank you I really started here with the left foot and everything else I'm sorry to have caused so much excitement around here!
I apologize to all and I did not understand what it means IMO?
Well I'll keep posting my drawings in it DevianArt but I thank you all for helping me and everything.
Thanks and hope when I actually get better at drawing I promise I'll be back to post here so you guys can judge if this is good or not so it ate more!

Signature Image

  • Oct 20, 2013

pandemonium91

Retired Moderator, Tagger

pandemonium91

Lazy af

Cancel

Quote by sidneythorI understood What do you mean and thank you I really started here with the left foot and everything else I'm sorry to have caused so much excitement around here!
I apologize to all and I did not understand what it means IMO?
Well I'll keep posting my drawings in it DevianArt but I thank you all for helping me and everything.
Thanks and hope when I actually get better at drawing I promise I'll be back to post here so you guys can judge if this is good or not so it ate more!

IMO = in my opinion :)
GOod luck, and hope to see you back soon with awesome stuff!

sidneythor

sidneythor

Enchento Supiritto Eboryūshon!

Cancel

Good afternoon everyone!
I come here after some time and would like to know the opnion of you on the following drawings I made ​​myself:

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/281/e/e/20131008_153759_by_sidneythor-d6pq304.jpg
http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/5/a/20131008_153932_by_sidneythor-d6pq2su.jpg
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/c/6/20131008_155219_by_sidneythor-d6pq0t6.jpg
http://th00.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/f/3/20131008_155437_by_sidneythor-d6pq0no.jpg
http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/9/4/20131008_155642_by_sidneythor-d6pq0i0.jpg
http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/0/1/20131008_155104_by_sidneythor-d6pq0yp.jpg
http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/b/f/20131008_155050_by_sidneythor-d6pq0zf.jpg
http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/4/2/20131008_155045_by_sidneythor-d6pq101.jpg
http://th03.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/a/b/20131008_155001_by_sidneythor-d6pq112.jpg
http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/1/b/20131008_154949_by_sidneythor-d6pq124.jpg
http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/d/d/20131008_154940_by_sidneythor-d6pq12t.jpg
http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/d/d/20131008_154933_by_sidneythor-d6pq13s.jpg
http://th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/6/e/20131008_155418_by_sidneythor-d6pq0pd.jpg
http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/f/2/20131008_155450_by_sidneythor-d6pq0mp.jpg
http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/2/5/20131008_154920_by_sidneythor-d6pq14w.jpg
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/305/e/6/evil_goku__by_sidneythor-d6pq0xn.jpg
http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/305/1/2/punisher__by_sidneythor-d6pq0l1.jpg
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/0/7/20131008_154647_by_sidneythor-d6pq1n1.jpg
http://th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/4/7/20131008_154014_by_sidneythor-d6pq2nk.jpg
http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/3/4/20131008_154006_by_sidneythor-d6pq2on.jpg
http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/8/a/20131008_154147_by_sidneythor-d6pq2h2.jpg
http://th06.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/b/4/20131008_153908_by_sidneythor-d6pq2vl.jpg
http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/b/8/20131008_154910_by_sidneythor-d6pq15s.jpg
http://th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/c/f/20131008_154900_by_sidneythor-d6pq16h.jpg
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/c/d/20131008_154430_by_sidneythor-d6pq206.jpg
http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/2/d/20131008_154405_by_sidneythor-d6pq244.jpg
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/9/1/20131008_154339_by_sidneythor-d6pq27d.jpg
http://th04.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/3/f/20131008_154203_by_sidneythor-d6pq2fw.jpg
http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/3/8/20131008_154023_by_sidneythor-d6pq2mh.jpg
http://th03.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/f/d/20131008_153952_by_sidneythor-d6pq2q1.jpg
http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/a/d/20131008_153943_by_sidneythor-d6pq2rx.jpg
http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/281/1/d/20131008_153918_by_sidneythor-d6pq2u6.jpg
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/281/8/d/20131008_155426_by_sidneythor-d6pq0og.jpg

Well those were the last drawings I've done since the last day that I came in contact with you today and hope you like it and sorry if the angle of them are crooked but I think it will not disrupt anything ok!
Thank you for your attention and please hopefully this time not all but some of you like my drawings even if the standard is not that I just want you guys require that one need not be all tell me that my drawings were better compared to my first drawing sent to check you guys!

The least I ask is that you tell me if I can improve neses last time or my drawings had a slump?

Well I appreciate the attention and patience of you even if my drawings are not within your requirements I will feel glad that I struggled to try to improve and be recognized until more!

Signature Image

  • Nov 13, 2013

pandemonium91

Retired Moderator, Tagger

pandemonium91

Lazy af

Cancel

I think they're great! Did you copy them from existing sources (tracing) or are they original works? You definitely got better at proportions and good call on inking them, the inked ones look much better than the ones done in pencil (first two and the few last ones). So yes, keep inking them. Also, try drawing on simple paper, if you're using lined paper it will affect the proportions of your drawings and you won't be able to see the lines on your work very clearly.

By the way, did you also draw this one? I'm asking because it doesn't look like your other ones (style, coloring etc.). It looks printed.

sidneythor

sidneythor

Enchento Supiritto Eboryūshon!

Cancel

Quote by pandemonium91I think they're great! Did you copy them from existing sources (tracing) or are they original works? You definitely got better at proportions and good call on inking them, the inked ones look much better than the ones done in pencil (first two and the few last ones). So yes, keep inking them. Also, try drawing on simple paper, if you're using lined paper it will affect the proportions of your drawings and you won't be able to see the lines on your work very clearly.

By the way, did you also draw this one? I'm asking because it doesn't look like your other ones (style, coloring etc.). It looks printed.

Thank you I really do not have time to color them, but I appreciate you liked.
What about the design that you said seems impressed I'll tell you what can not notice that I had drawn in her notebook but then I decided to take a blank sheet and redrew it and asked a friend who knows the coloring style you saw there!
I'll even put subtitles and everything else to say ok this detail.
But of the empressao but is not printed.

merged: 01-21-2014 ~ 03:37pm
Good afternoon and would like to ask the opinion of you all about my new design that I made and would like to know if you liked it or not just that nothing more:
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/021/2/6/20140121_072351_by_sidneythor-d733fpq.jpg
If you like it I'm grateful and I only regret not like and try as hard as I can to try to do better thank you and have a great day ok
I'm not going to try to post my drawings here will just visit the site occasionally reviews and ask about my designs ok thanks and even more and really apologize for bothering ok.

Signature Image

  • Nov 14, 2013

page 1 of 1 19 total items

Back to The Sandbox | Active Threads | Forum Index

Only members can post replies, please register.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse the site you are agreeing to our use of cookies. Read more.