Just a poem about my current feelings...hope you enjoy..or w/e..T_T

High up on the moon
thats where i watch over you
the stars, the sky..
my friends through my life

That one big day
the day of true happiness
torn away
by childish incopidence

You were the love
the love i've dreamed of
but now i know i walked in too soon
but no matter how far
how far you may be
i'll still be here
shinning over you..

i know it sucks big time..i dont really care anymore anyways..lo..
hope you enjoy..

toxic makes better poems than stellar. all stellar knows is rose r red. lol but i think its just wondrful. ^_^

I love it!!

Your poems always reach my heart theyre so well wroded and worth reading

And I love this poem the best so far because I feel like it is reality for me

Thanks so much Toxictea for sharing another one of youyr brilliant poems

Aww, that's very sweet. ^_^ You have such nice poems. But I think its spelled 'shining'

/grammar nazi

XD It is really is a good poem though, keep up your nice work.

Wow....You make the most beautiful poems.I wish I can write poems as good as you.I can't wait for your next poem.Keep upi the good work!

Wow, that is a beautiful poem. Your very talented toxictea. You should rejoice.

Wow!! Your poems are the best, toxictea23!! You are very talented!! ^_^ I can't wait till your next poem!!

i like it. sounds sad but calmig

An thus the seas are calm this day
over the plains of sorrow my wings cometh
through the agonies of fate and despair we trample them forth
You guide yourself through the darkness,
Overshadowed by your confusion and discontent
For you might find what your looking for...
Through paradise unwind.

Your poems always touches my heart makes me wanna cry lol. Nice poem keep up the good job

No! It doesnt suck. Compared to mine. That is better. I love this poem.

how beautiful && lovely! it don't suck! my poems suck! i love it toxictea-chan! ^^

don`t say it sucks!!! its the exact opposite... i felt the emotion of wanting to see someone u love but can`t cause you know it was never meant to be.... your poem was amazing!! u should enter in contests... i`m sur u`d win...

Your poems are always so sad! Makes me wanna cry! :'(
Your poems are the best!
Thanks toxictea23 for sharing your wonderful talent!! ^.^

Don't say that, they don't suck. I love your poems. I hope you write more!

Wow, you sure expressed a lot of
feelings through this poem. I think
it's awesome, and you know it ^^

Hey it doesn't sucks to my ears but rather it sounds very sweet. I can see that you love to make poems. Hope I can read more of your work.

Take care.

Thanks.

Roses are red
Violence makes me blue
keep writing poems
or i wont talk to you

lol do I have talent ??

Hello, How are you doing?
its a nice poem...
you always say thats its bad and that it sux...but it doesnt
im looking forward to ur next ones
well...
see you later
ciao~

your poems aren't bad at all. i thought i was very nice. hoping to read your next one.

your poem was very pretty, i enjoyed reading it =3