Where do I get these silly dreams?
These that I know cease to exist,
but fill the emptiness of my mind.
A loud voice screams "YOU CANT DO IT!!"
another yells "It`s not in your genes!"
and another chimes in "what were you thinking?!"
others keep coming and coming until i`m surrounded by a chorus of voices..
But a tiny voice, the voice of good, speaks out
not loud, but a whisper that drowns out the chorus of voices says
"What if it were possible?"

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Interesting poem ^-^!

Very good!

wow this ones just awesome to!

i love it

Too simplistic, but maybe that was intended. Message so clear, but maybe that's what you wanted.

Don't listen to others, but none other than the voice inside. We are all branded with insight, a force guiding light in the darkness.

I like the idea of that poem, not that I follow by it all the time (I should though)...it's a good poem, the simplicity of it makes it better, to try to complicate it would take away from the point.

Like the sentiment, it's a good idea

cool..the simplicity of it can create a very deep meaning to the poem..nice work!

its very personal and im sure can be emphatised by every1. not sure silly is a good word to use in a poem though.
anyways great poem, simplest thing are often the most beutifull