mm.. I am not very good at this, but I hope you like it..
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.:Afraid:.

I am afraid to try
to fail

I am afraid to care
too much
or maybe at all

I am afraid to loose
your love
or even my ability to love

I am afraid of loss
of loneliness

I am afraid of others
of pain...despair... depression

I am afraid to believe
to show weakness

I am afraid of my own destiny
my own fate
my own choices

I am afraid of what will be
and what will never be

I am afraid of you
I am afraid of myself

well-expressed poem, I like it. But there's no need to be afraid, open your heart and let others accept you for who you are.

Quote by SketchDR10well-expressed poem, I like it. But there's no need to be afraid, open your heart and let others accept you for who you are.

thats very sweet...
I promise I will try...

This is a very well writen poem I think. It seems so very deep and personal. Is this a representation of how you feel?? If it is I agree with SketchDR10, you shouldn't feel afraid of those things, if they are what make you up, you should embrace them.

I love the poem^^ But it seems like you made this poem for someone, haven't you? I can tell^^ Hope you make more poems in minitokyo. I'll see you again soon.

"Do not be afraid to love others. You are still searching for the person who will love you forever."

awww... such a sad and touching poem!! you put a lot of details in your poems!! i hope you continue to make more poems in the meantime!! keep up the good work, Fire-Flies!! ^.^

why are afraid we all are on your side just call us and we will come
but to the poem it is not good it is fantastic looooooooooooool

Such a sad poem.. But a great job! But I you shouldn't be scared of those things, you shuold try to face them and become stronger

actually this poem express exactly what on other people mind.
really are good.
this is the feeling that people try to cover up all the time.
you are good.
we all try to cover what we feel.
we all scare what other think of us.
we scare that other know the truth about us.
we scare they will not exacpt us.

we are different that what make us who we are.

Oww... I love this poem, its touching, and very sad... but like darkness said, youre not the only one who feel this way, I do, we all do....

nice poem you did a great job on it

Great poem's i like poem's make's me happy unless it's a sad poem like this one ... well i hope you make a lot more poem so i can read^^

very nice. i can feel the emotion in it. please write more and post them

Thank you for the nice comment everyone.. i really appreciate it

Really great poem! And as people said above, you're not the only one who feels like that...(I know I do). But here I as are other are ur friends, so you can trust in us.

basicly ur afraid of almost anything right??? Well hope ya change that kind of thinkin^_^

Quote by s9031496cbasicly ur afraid of almost anything right??? Well hope ya change that kind of thinkin^_^

Not really..
its a poem..so its just an expression of my deepest thoughts..

You shouldn't be afraid you should take chances and hope for the best...
That almost always work for me *smile*

This is a great poem, one of the bests here, its depriment, but good. Try to cheer up, just act as yourself, anything u might need u can count on me. Take care fire-flies.

That is a wonderful poem sad but a great piece of work...........Cya around

Afraid of life are we? It describes everyday living and communication, stemmed from the unknown - a common plague of fear most people have. I was innately born with a lot of fear, fear of the reality around me and the lack of schema, prior knowledge. With nothing to fall back on, it was not easy living afraid and expressing that weakness. Over time fear diminishes through understanding and a whole new person is born.

thank you for the comments ^^

Yeah cool im not the only one that belivie's its a good poem

Fire-Flies you are really good to write poems.
I think like the others: if you are afraid, we're here ^____^