I hope that u like it....I missed you so much here is a little poem:
walking alone in the street
waiting desesperately
for a chance to see
your cute face looking at me
I remember that day
when your lips touch mine
then you put your arms arround me
feeling that warmth that came from u
that moment I feel so great
that I never wanted to leave u
to be with u all the time
and tell u that
I love u more than anything
then that day arrived
I didn't see u for 6 months
Crying to see you
dreaming with you
feeling lonely
Then I came back
and you where there
waiting for me
I ran and ran 'till I reach you
we kiss each other with love
and realized that
our love was more that the distance.
-------------------------------------------(...)
I love you my lovee! *muak*
I hope u enjoy my new poem...^_^ sorry about the main title...I don't think in
the title....more in the poem.
Quote by ZeroDegresswow O_O nicely
done WF good job lovey but sad kind of with a good shade of happiness great
blending with it
hehe
well this poem is sad and happy, I try to use both because this is how I felt in
that moment
I wanted to show the saddeness I had when I wasn't with my BF
nice coment ^_^
i thank u very much zero!!!
oh, there's so much emotion in the poem...and i can really get a sense of your
feelings of sadness when you couldn't be with your bf, but it ends beautifully!
and you're so right that love should overcome distance!
Quote by bblsoh, there's so much emotion in
the poem...and i can really get a sense of your feelings of sadness when you
couldn't be with your bf, but it ends beautifully! and you're so right that
love should overcome distance!
hi bbls!!
I'm back but with many things here to do
thanks for the nice coment!! I really appreciate it especially from you my
friend ^_^
really thank you very much^_^
I agree, it should. But I used to get a faint feeling of depression when my gf
was far away. It was a horrible feeling. As you should know, long distance
relationships dont tend to work out.
I agree, it should. But I used to get a faint feeling of depression when my gf
was far away. It was a horrible feeling. As you should know, long distance
relationships dont tend to work out.
hi hi!!
yeah...as u said: long distance relationships dont tend to work out. but I have
hope and he too....Was magical and I really apreciated to be the one he choose
to be by his side (me too)
thanks for participatingg!!!!
take careee!; kisses!; bye bye! ^_^
wowie *cries* I loved that poem WF maybe one day *snifs* I'll be able to make a
poem as great as this one *snifs *
hehe^^ it really relates to me .....welll nice job
Quote by MayaNatsume17Everyone's
writing love poems.....I think it's a very nice poem. You did a good job on
it.
hi!
yeah??...=P thats a new for me ^_^
thanks for the nice coment!
bye bye!!
Quote by ever-rulerWow, this is a very
nice poem, very touching. Good job.
you say it!!
touching one ^_^, my bf said the same
thanks for the nice coment my friend!! ^_^
bye bye!
Quote by smielswowie *cries* I loved that
poem WF maybe one day *snifs* I'll be able to make a poem as great as this one
*snifs *
hehe^^ it really relates to me .....welll nice job
I know that u'll be able to make poems, beautiful poems ^_^, I make love poems
'cause I am in love (duh?XP)
I really appreciated your nice coment!!
thank you so much for participatin on it ^_^ .
Quote by twilighthey nice poem!!! make
more for everyone to read!!!!
hahah! well I'll try...'cause with the school...pf! I have little time....but
don't worry I will make more ^^
thank you so much for participatin on my thread!=)
Quote by danielbgrissoIt is a great
poem. I realy enjoined reading it.
hi! wow! thankss!! I'm very glad that u enjoy it!
That makes me very happy!!! =D
thank you so much for participatin on it =D
Quote by ayane-heineooOOoo~~ a lovey
poem there..
you are making everyone to feel so emotional now.. >_<*dreams*
anyway, thanx for sharing this lovey poem.. ^^
hi ayaneee!!!
aaww!!..yeah?! =) feeling emotional...I like those words heheh
thats how I feel when I make poems or songs ^^
thank you so much for participatin on it ^_^
bye bye!
Another excellent poem, sophie. Really romantic, sweet and with a warm fuzzy
feeling. I love it! If only I could have a girlfriend as sweet as you... Your
boyfriend is really lucky.
Quote by requiemXAnother excellent poem,
sophie. Really romantic, sweet and with a warm fuzzy feeling. I love it! If only
I could have a girlfriend as sweet as you... Your boyfriend is really
lucky.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!
you are so nice my dear friend!!!!^^
I'm really but really sure that u're going to find a gf that will love u very
much!!
guaranteed!
thanks for the really nice coment! I apreciate it very much!!! ^^
bye bye!
Quote by sukiesweet..i like the way you put
feelings into words... they poems i write are something on the lines of:
there was a rosethen there was a nose_______ROFL, good poem!!
=D
hahaha! thank you very much for participating in my thread my friend!
don't worry, I know that u can make better things that make poems ^^..I'm sure
=)
bye bye!
I hope that u like it....I missed you so much here is a little poem:
walking alone in the street
waiting desesperately
for a chance to see
your cute face looking at me
I remember that day
when your lips touch mine
then you put your arms arround me
feeling that warmth that came from u
that moment I feel so great
that I never wanted to leave u
to be with u all the time
and tell u that
I love u more than anything
then that day arrived
I didn't see u for 6 months
Crying to see you
dreaming with you
feeling lonely
Then I came back
and you where there
waiting for me
I ran and ran 'till I reach you
we kiss each other with love
and realized that
our love was more that the distance.
-------------------------------------------(...)
I love you my lovee! *muak*
I hope u enjoy my new poem...^_^ sorry about the main title...I don't think in the title....more in the poem.
bye bye!
wow O_O nicely done WF good job lovey but sad kind of with a good shade of happiness great blending with it
hehe
well this poem is sad and happy, I try to use both because this is how I felt in that moment
I wanted to show the saddeness I had when I wasn't with my BF
nice coment ^_^
i thank u very much zero!!!
bye bye!
I like tone of the poem, when I read it i'm imagining a cute 12 year old girl with a high pitch voice reading it. Great job.
oh, there's so much emotion in the poem...and i can really get a sense of your feelings of sadness when you couldn't be with your bf, but it ends beautifully! and you're so right that love should overcome distance!
hi bbls!!
I'm back but with many things here to do
thanks for the nice coment!! I really appreciate it especially from you my friend ^_^
really thank you very much^_^
(Tired I am
)Z_z
take care now!
kisses!!!!!
bye bye!
Nice poem! Encore!
I agree, it should. But I used to get a faint feeling of depression when my gf was far away. It was a horrible feeling. As you should know, long distance relationships dont tend to work out.
haha!
nyaa!! thankkss!...
thanks for participating in my thread!
bye bye!
hi hi!!
yeah...as u said: long distance relationships dont tend to work out. but I have hope and he too....Was magical and I really apreciated to be the one he choose to be by his side (me too)
thanks for participatingg!!!!
take careee!; kisses!; bye bye! ^_^
wow... it is so romantic!! your love must be very glad to have you!! lol!! thansk for sharing your poems with us all!!
aww! fairy!!!
you are very cutee!!!
I am glad that u like it ^__^
Thanks for participating in my thread!!
bye bye!
Everyone's writing love poems.....I think it's a very nice poem. You did a good job on it.
Wow, this is a very nice poem, very touching. Good job.
wowie *cries* I loved that poem WF maybe one day *snifs* I'll be able to make a poem as great as this one *snifs *
hehe^^ it really relates to me .....welll nice job
hey nice poem!!! make more for everyone to read!!!!
It is a great poem. I realy enjoined reading it.
ooOOoo~~ a lovey poem there..
you are making everyone to feel so emotional now..
*dreams*
anyway, thanx for sharing this lovey poem.. ^^
hi!
yeah??...=P thats a new for me ^_^
thanks for the nice coment!
bye bye!!
you say it!!
touching one ^_^, my bf said the same
thanks for the nice coment my friend!! ^_^
bye bye!
I know that u'll be able to make poems, beautiful poems ^_^, I make love poems 'cause I am in love (duh?XP)
I really appreciated your nice coment!!
thank you so much for participatin on it ^_^ .
hahah! well I'll try...'cause with the school...pf! I have little time....but don't worry I will make more ^^
thank you so much for participatin on my thread!=)
hi! wow! thankss!! I'm very glad that u enjoy it!
That makes me very happy!!! =D
thank you so much for participatin on it =D
hi ayaneee!!!
aaww!!..yeah?! =) feeling emotional...I like those words
thank you so much for participatin on it ^_^
bye bye!
Aw, beautiful poem! I really like love it. ^.^
Exellent!
I'm very glad that u like it ^^
happy happy happy!!!!!XD
thanks for participating in my thread ^_^!
muak?
Quite a beautiful poem. You two must really be in love! Lucky guy
hahahahah!!!
nonono! the muak ( =P ) was not in the poem
yeaaahh!!!..I love him with all my heart! ^_^
Very nice coment!!!!!
I really apreciate your coments! ^_^
bye bye!
Another excellent poem, sophie. Really romantic, sweet and with a warm fuzzy feeling. I love it! If only I could have a girlfriend as sweet as you... Your boyfriend is really lucky.
sweet..i like the way you put feelings into words... they poems i write are something on the lines of:
there was a rose
then there was a nose
_______
ROFL, good poem!! =D
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!
you are so nice my dear friend!!!!^^
I'm really but really sure that u're going to find a gf that will love u very much!!
guaranteed!
thanks for the really nice coment! I apreciate it very much!!! ^^
bye bye!
hahaha! thank you very much for participating in my thread my friend!
don't worry, I know that u can make better things that make poems ^^..I'm sure =)
bye bye!