I want to dedicate this one to somone, if you wonder, then by all means just
gander. I hope people will not get too confused by the writing, cause the poem
is very packed with symbolism and a piece of Greek prophesy. Can anyone catch
it?
on a nightly prose
mind wandering slightly
she was there and arose
and strode reaming almighty
the fear, here she cometh
sneaking, creeping, peeping
loose does the grip get
always failing, availing
whence came Cassandra?
not a soul could believe
but we climbed together
nevermore to bereave
to fall is to catch
22 yet I am stronger
your will is a match
I adore you, no wonder
hmm...cassandra was the one whose prophecies would not be believed altho they
were true right? (apollo and troy and such). good job w/ the poem by the way.
You m*^*%* f%$#%* as*@^#, I already reviewed three poems form xange and now you
throw another one. This is suppose to be my vacation, I don't want to think if
I could help it. Nevertheless... it is quite a nice love poem [wait isn't this
your first love poem?] So whos that special someone.
I want to dedicate this one to somone, if you wonder, then by all means just gander. I hope people will not get too confused by the writing, cause the poem is very packed with symbolism and a piece of Greek prophesy. Can anyone catch it?
on a nightly prose
mind wandering slightly
she was there and arose
and strode reaming almighty
the fear, here she cometh
sneaking, creeping, peeping
loose does the grip get
always failing, availing
whence came Cassandra?
not a soul could believe
but we climbed together
nevermore to bereave
to fall is to catch
22 yet I am stronger
your will is a match
I adore you, no wonder
hmm...cassandra was the one whose prophecies would not be believed altho they were true right? (apollo and troy and such). good job w/ the poem by the way.
nice!you've started poetry too...and with rhymes.ooohlala.and you were the one asking what is the point of poetry LOL
very insightful poem, and like yuo mentioned, quite prophesy-like with those old age words e.g cometh
humm i wonder who is this poem for?? ^_~
wow that is nice. i love this one. you did a great job on this. two-thumbs way up on this one!!
waw sounds like a confession of love, but to whom lol
You m*^*%* f%$#%* as*@^#, I already reviewed three poems form xange and now you throw another one. This is suppose to be my vacation, I don't want to think if I could help it. Nevertheless... it is quite a nice love poem [wait isn't this your first love poem?] So whos that special someone.
ooo great line right here, sounds neat sounding, great job on the poem!
Very Nice Poem, but how many times have u proposed?
It was a good poem. Casandra was the bringer of death, right? Or something like that anyway.