wear my T-Shirt feel secure
be my princess and make sure
that my gentle fingertips
always touch your tender lips
never rush slow down I`m yours
feel my pain just read my thoughts
connecting souls to feel my trust
guiding angel in the dust
close to me though far away
dry our tears and make me stay
any failures maeningless
hold me tight to catch my breathe
small of parfume left today
rememberance of swift decay
words unspoken pure and true
hard to say but I love you

Hope you like it

Wow nice poem i really like umm.. do you mind if i copy it!

Thanks you like it
No problem, of course you can copy it!

Nice poem, but you do have some spelling errors and could put some commas in some of the lines where you want a pause. Nevertheless, very well done, the poem flows well and it also rhymes (I know how hard it is to do that). Again, nice job.

this is nice:) better than i could ever do

keep up the good work

Hey 13md! Pretty nice poem, I like the rhymes but it lacks meaning in some ways. Well nothing that I can make out what you are trying to say... Can you tell me alittle story about the poem? So I can understand from your points of view.

Well, I wrote it for my one and only love of my life. It reflects on the last night we shared together before she had to go away. I miss her right now, but even she is away for a while, I am feeling like being connected with her all the time because we are kind of soulmates.

Hope you can understand it better now

very romantic poem 13md, I am sure sema will love it..

Quote by 13mdWell, I wrote it for my one and only love of my life. It reflects on the last night we shared together before she had to go away. I miss her right now, but even she is away for a while, I am feeling like being connected with her all the time because we are kind of soulmates.
Hope you can understand it better now

Nice! I change my mind about it... it's not a good poem... it's a great poem ^_^ nicely defines the person you are at that moment in time. Though I do feel like I miss understood it alittle from your spelling error. But thanks for sharing it XP

Quote by melonbrustvery romantic poem 13md, I am sure sema will love it..

yes I do .... I love it XP .....girl u know me to good...

thanks sweetheart that u make this wonderful poem for me ... ( think = hope u mean me ** kidding my sweetheart ** ) u know it was very hard to leave u and it is right now harder for me ... but it is meaning so much for me that u wrote this wonderful words as u had though on me ... me the simple sema ... ich fuehle mich so geehert... vielen lieben dank baby du verstehst es eine frau zum weinen zu bringen...

*hugs my babe*

Awwww what a romantic poem