I found this poem at home, and I thought: Why not share with others ^-^ My head never thought of putting up poems until now Though now it did :P

A glittering ray of the sun
Searched through the dark
And kissed a frozen mouth.
Wondering, Awakening a smile
and drove the shadows out of the gaze.
Loud and clear, a song rose from the
petrified sparrows throat.

So? Whatcha think? ;P

aww sound like a fairy tale story where the prince woke up the snow white.. ^^
how romantic.. ^^

It's nice and really romantic. ^^ You did a great job! Hope to see more! ^^

Sounds really nice.
I like the words too, sounds romantic.
Great job!