Sentinels beeping within
the thick dark sky
shrine of an levitating approach
gathered in my power
duplicates my voice
testifies before their eyes.

Half open the skin
with the crimson sins
pouring down the very edge
blinking lights reveal
particles of sights and tears.

Filtrates and reaches
no matter where it is
slipping through passages
gliding past it's prey.

wow this is deep. i love it............... keep up the great poems

If I could find the right words from my empty head, I would say them.
At this moment I can say this: the level of your poems are high. So, they are VERY good indeed. This' getting old saying habit, perhaps?

thanks hun

Nice one! ^_^

You are a very good writer Xange... this was cute.

okay...is it someone superiors speaking? or did i get it wrong?
if i'm right, the way u described it is really nice!
like kuikka-kun said, ur level at poetry is really high!
thanx for sharing such thought!
Leo

sounds like you're swimming in blood, all high and mighty queen of the damned...

your peoms just get more abstract, i think you like to tease your readers (or at least entice some thought).

slipping, you are, into a world of darkness; bwahahahahahahaa...

lol he's terribly right. I do tease in every word i create some how unintentionally

well, teasing ur readers is a way of catching their attention
it still is nice if i would say...

Wow!! Such a deep and unique poem!!! Great job!!

By any chance do you have a dairy and someone read it withour your premission. Because this poem seems to be showing that. Like a personal secret(s) have been reveled to someone you didn't want to reveal it to, and you were standing right there when it happened. Thats what I got out of it. But damn girl, you are getting a lot more abstract, I had read the poem 10 times before I could come up with a dairy situation. Good job!

good job on this one eve onee-chan!
you keep on getting better and better, its awesome!
keep it up!

I agree with jasaiyajin on the "blood" part. And it does tend to get everywhere no matter how you try to hide it. Thanks for sharing another great poem. Also I have to give you kudos on your tag line under your avatar, "I'll show you my reunion", I just love Advent Children!

lol thanks ~ jono~ you are close since it has to do with words not really a journal

~iiwa your so kawaii thanks for wasting time reading my crap

~Sazriel thanks for blood is very near what i mean but is not really blood but red medicine and yay i luv Advent Children as well you could tell

Wow it's really deep. I like the words...
Really great poem!!

Sounds like an evasion of some sort from another world, or a army of Sentinels are about to do a mutant round-up XP . This has me terribly perplexed, I have no clue what you're trying to get at with this poem, but I must agree with jasai, you do like to tease people with your wording and your poems are getting moe and more abstract. It's awesome through and through, keep it up .
p.s. I might come back and try to decipher what the theme of the poem is if someone else has not.

Quote by GintheTwilightswordsSounds like an evasion of some sort from another world, or a army of Sentinels are about to do a mutant round-up XP . This has me terribly perplexed, I have no clue what you're trying to get at with this poem, but I must agree with jasai, you do like to tease people with your wording and your poems are getting moe and more abstract. It's awesome through and through, keep it up .
p.s. I might come back and try to decipher what the theme of the poem is if someone else has not.

lol i wish you could decipher it ...the meaning is really simple

well. mahahaha. here comes mxc you're biggest critic.
well i totally agree with the diary thing.
i can't really picture a another world but. i going to reread it now.
i guessing you talking about heaven as the other world in your title.
-mxc