Hiyah everyone im back with another poem of mine, i hope you like it. oh yeah
srry if the poem layout is kinda weird im very sleepy and im about to fall
out.lol
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crying one thousand tears for the man i love, it hurts to say "Goodbye my
love", not knowing how our relationship began, we only know the painful
memories of how it ends,
not knowing where are relationship will go from here on then, as time flows and
we start to walk our sepreate paths i slowly start to remember the life we
had,
so much love and trust, firery desires turn to hot passion and lust and hearing
you say my name is no longer the same,through out the heartache and pain our
relationship is stained in our own hatred and it will never be the same unless i
go back to u,
we can undo the wrongs and make them right, take our time and start out right,
and hopefully if you see this through, we can go back to loving each other just
like we use to.
Wow! Another passionate poem from the passionate poet.
I really like this one, though what's happening in my love life is the exact
opposite of your poem. Thumbs up!
o_O.....im not surprized....this is very nice....no in fact..its LOVELY...very
well put about starting over...very sad though,but its very nice...and a keeper
in mind...please continue the great efferts of your poems..there realli good
Hiyah everyone im back with another poem of mine, i hope you like it. oh yeah srry if the poem layout is kinda weird im very sleepy and im about to fall out.lol
(Start again)
crying one thousand tears for the man i love, it hurts to say "Goodbye my love", not knowing how our relationship began, we only know the painful memories of how it ends,
not knowing where are relationship will go from here on then, as time flows and we start to walk our sepreate paths i slowly start to remember the life we had,
so much love and trust, firery desires turn to hot passion and lust and hearing you say my name is no longer the same,through out the heartache and pain our relationship is stained in our own hatred and it will never be the same unless i go back to u,
we can undo the wrongs and make them right, take our time and start out right, and hopefully if you see this through, we can go back to loving each other just like we use to.
So what do you think?
It is so great. It is better and it makes me feel sorrowful.
. But it is
still okay.
Thanks friend that boost my confidence up, still for some reason i feel like my first poem was better i wonder why.Anyway thanks for the nice comment.
That is one good poem, I see the feelings in themT-T*tears of joy* So beautiful.....
Hope to see more of your poems soon^^
Wow...my pupil is so good! Nice poem..sad and romantic. Keep up the good work and who knows you might surpass me! hehe...^_^
Wow! Another passionate poem from the passionate poet.
I really like this one, though what's happening in my love life is the exact opposite of your poem. Thumbs up!
Wowies this poem is very good . Its kinda sad but romantic. Great job .
WOW a great poem kinda fill me up with hope for a better tommorow... Thanks for sharing ^^
What they all said..this is a truly beautiful poem...-sigh- So pretty!
Thanks everyone for the nice comments.
o_O.....im not surprized....this is very nice....no in fact..its LOVELY...very well put about starting over...very sad though,but its very nice...and a keeper in mind...please continue the great efferts of your poems..there realli good
