this is dedacated to my gurl Lumina
this is for u baby
Romance
were twisting and turning
with love so burning
your making me feel
your love tonight
kissing and touching you is alright
i give you love
i make you feel right
baby ill give you the key to my heart
to see you smile
to see you laugh
to love you once
would never be enough
baby im yours
tonight and forever
so plz take this key
to heart forever
wow, so so touching. the girl you wrote it to must be lucky to have you . it was
cute. i liked it. your such a good poet. me, I suck badly. the only word i can
rhyme is bat, cat .lol. just joking. really it was good. see ya soon. =)
That is very romantic! I like it, especially the ending. It touched me. I
could never writ e a poem no matter what.
U r girlfriend is lucky to have u as a boyfriend
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! itz so sweet!!! i am now one of your fans!!! u hav major
talent!! *sigh* wish i had a guy write somethin as good as this to me...UR girl
sure is lucky!! i'll be waitin for ur next poem 'k? ^.~ take care *waves* bye =P
this is dedacated to my gurl Lumina
this is for u baby
Romance
were twisting and turning
with love so burning
your making me feel
your love tonight
kissing and touching you is alright
i give you love
i make you feel right
baby ill give you the key to my heart
to see you smile
to see you laugh
to love you once
would never be enough
baby im yours
tonight and forever
so plz take this key
to heart forever
^^ i really hope you like it *blush*
Matt, this is so sweet...
I love it... thank you...
aaaaawww sssssssooooooooooo cute
*sniffle*
it brings a tear to my eye lolz 
wow, so so touching. the girl you wrote it to must be lucky to have you
. it was
cute. i liked it. your such a good poet. me, I suck badly. the only word i can
rhyme is bat, cat .lol. just joking. really it was good. see ya soon. =)
its a very sweet poem
Hehe, very sweet of you to write and dedicate this poem to her!
Love the ending, great job!
awww thats just so sweet
i like the
ending, very romantic
That is cute... sounds kind of like it would be good in a song...
it's a cute and sweet poem. i really love the ending "so plz take this key
to heart forever"! Good job!!!
That is very romantic! I like it, especially the ending. It touched me. I could never writ e a poem no matter what.
U r girlfriend is lucky to have u as a boyfriend
aww how cute and sweet...she must be really lucky to have you...teehee...nice poem! ^_^ keep up the good work!
omg!!!!u bettter write more love poems!!!!U GOT THE TALENT!!!!!more!!!!this is the first time i actually like poems!!!!
hmp seems ya now have fans night,lol must be nice,anyway you and ya gf i hope you 2 do great together,the best of luck to ya
waw go get her tiger
Awwwwww this poem is so sweet. Thanks for sharring it.
Sweet poem..... Thanks for sharing
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!
itz so sweet!!! i am now one of your fans!!! 
u hav major
talent!! *sigh* wish i had a guy write somethin as good as this to me...UR girl
sure is lucky!! 
i'll be waitin for ur next poem 'k? ^.~ take care *waves* bye =P
so very sweet and intense in a way. i love it.
aw its good to see that some guys still write poems to girls, thats sweet and dont blush
Yeah I liked this poem too
Awwww! That is so cute.
I hope that you two have a long and happy relationship.
Awww nice poem. Thanks for sharing ^^
Gosh, nitetrain... I can't keep my eyes of your poems. ^^
I <3 Yah.
- Lumina
*swoons* she's lucky^^
nice one!