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(poem)The day she left

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Today I miss her,
Why did you leave me?

Today is the day she left,
so quiet..........

Where have you gone?
Why didn't you come back

The day she left,when we had our first argument
We both were sad......

So come back.............
I been missing you

cry...........
forever...........
die with nobody...........

I should be lonely,
nothing make's things easier,

It gets worst........
now good bye.........

This is a good poem^^
-zero-walt

Now this... is like my poetry...
Good work Zero-Kun...
Keep 'em commin...

Quote by zero-waltThis is a good poem^^
-zero-walt

lol yeah it is, a sad feeling from it though, but overall nice job ^^ thx for sharing

Aw, this one is nice! I like this one!

aww....it is a very sad and a emotional poem! i always get you and marauder mixed up!! great job on the details! you must feel very depressed! :(

man, you shure can write poems zero, keep up the good work.

great job! i can relate and sorry for the cause of your sorrow.

It's so sad, yet touching. *sucks at poems* tt_tt I envy your talent. ^.^ Nya~

T_T This is a truly sad poem but other then that, it's very deep and lovely! Great job, Takun!

thats cutee

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