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Hi,

actually I've edited my recent wallie (I've deleted the crime and time wallie of elfen laid) because Im not sure about the quality so I need your advice.. please

Please give your advice about this wallie.. http://www.thefilebucket.com/files/4517/wallpaper/1600x1200/Elfen%20Laid/crime.jpg

thanks for your advice and concern, its really help me...


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http://scully.deviantart.com

If you want your wall to be critiqued before submitting it to MT, please make use of the Sandbox : Submission Critique Thread here:

http://forum.minitokyo.net/showthread/25171/

Okay, I think that you need to do more too the newspapers behind the girl. You are wanting a burn effect righ? Don't use the magic wand tool to do that with. Erase what you want completly burned away, then used the burn tool that looks like a hand to burn the edges of what you just erased. If that isn't black enough, just select what is left of the newspaper and but some black or a dark color on the edges and blur it in.
Also, I think that you should do a little more to bring the girl into the wallpaper, like flames or somthing. And it does seem to be a little clusterd, but that adds to the effect of a chaotic event.
Other than that, I think that it is okay. I hope that I have helped you!

Quote by unicorn2006If you want your wall to be critiqued before submitting it to MT, please make use of the Sandbox : Submission Critique Thread here:
http://forum.minitokyo.net/showthread/25171/

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