this is my (i think) first poem i wrote when i didn't have to do anything in my english class but to watch a movie when i was in ninth grade which was cool. and i love this poem even though if no one likes it.

~quiet emotion~

as i look out the window
sad and depress
i felt a sudden warmness
pounding against
my chest
i was
wondering why
as the teardrops slide
why oh why
do i feel so warm
inside?
i wipe the
tears from my eyes
but then again i started
to cry
black rain clouds
appear the slitherist notion
how can i ever get
through this
quiet emotion

Nice one, pretty good.

Humm intresting poem nimiru Nicesly done

hee thx!! wind and ghost!!

nimiru, you should check out my poems. anyways nice for your first poem.

Quote by Shokunimiru, you should check out my poems. anyways nice for your first poem.

hee hee thank you!!!

This is a nice poem. Good job for your first poem ^^

This one is absolutely lovely I too have experienced this "quiet emotion" and the poem really speaks to me. Good job If only MT allowed us to favorite other people's poems

HEYO! i like this poem! onli if i can save it in fav but there aint any fav buttons hahaha

awwwwwwwwwww so sad, but very nice
really really nice