may not be a cool poem . . . but hope you like it!

Within

quietness
nothing but quietness
nothing but sweet tranquility
within
like the stillness of a winter day
within
like the warm breeze soothing a cold lake
within
loneliness
nothing but loneliness
someone to fill that emptiness
within
like running through a flower field
within
like someone holding you in his arms
within
silence
nothing but silence
just a sound of a love one's voice
within
gazing at the stars with someone by your side
within
singing your heart's desire
within
all that's within
nothing but within . . .

93 weeks and nobody has commented on this one >:( I personally think this is great But I'm starting to see a connection between your poems...

wow there is alot of withins hahaha but overall i like it go be a poet!

oh my i agree!
it's a very nice poem!
sooo nice!

Yes..Very good.