Here comes Alisha to the rescue! *da da daa* Nice pome j0n0 it's really cute and
sweet. Now as for the pic... *pulls it out and slaps it on the thread* Hope ya
like it
Quote by AlishaHere comes Alisha to the
rescue! *da da daa* Nice pome j0n0 it's really
cute and sweet. Now as for the pic... *pulls it out and slaps it on the
thread* Hope ya like it
Quote by AlishaHere comes Alisha to the
rescue! *da da daa* Nice pome j0n0 it's really
cute and sweet. Now as for the pic... *pulls it out and slaps it on the
thread* Hope ya like it
lol, thx but shes not smilling, it doesn't make sense if she doesn't smile.
Although you were flirting with a girl, I, like most of the time, found other
meanings. I thought of how much a difference a smile could make to the ones you
don't appreciate that well and make them feel part of even though they might not
be as close to you as others are. In sum I think less loved people deserve a
little happiness from one no matter if that person ain't your favorite. Lol I
think I over said it...hehe
Quote by AlishaBut she was smiling. Just
not that big. Then how about this
one?
This one is perfect, thx.
Quote by xangeAlthough you were flirting
with a girl, I, like most of the time, found
other meanings. I thought of how much a difference a smile could make
to the ones you don't appreciate that well and make them feel part of
even though they might not be as close to you as others are. In sum I
think less loved people deserve a little happiness from one no matter
if that person ain't your favorite. Lol I think I over said
it...hehe
I decided to make a little cute poem, (a.k.a. I'm flirting with girl) so I hope you guys can enjoy it. All comments/criticisms are wellcomed.
You smile,
You laugh,
Like a child
On a water slide.
But a mild irritation,
A slight deviation
And that pretty smile, vanishes
As if it were out of style.
But worry not
For the minor things
Have little strength
Compared to you.
So I beg you, Please!
Smile for us this day
And bring some small joy
To what can be, a delightful day.
enjoy
I want to burn my study book, I better pass the state exam for my license
This poem needs a picture, otherwise, it sux... ;p
Is that so wrong to not like a poem??? Is it?
this is a sweet poem i like it. keep up the good work
thanks you guys. A picture of what, a cute anime girl smilling? Hmm, that can work.
It's a good poem. Pictures would actually make it better. Not just one pic though. 4 would work.
lol, one picture for each stanza. Unfortunately i don't know how to do that.
Well I have some pics in mind, but if I were to post the pics they would be FAR to big. Then there is the fact that they are from different animes.
Here comes Alisha to the rescue! *da da daa* Nice pome j0n0 it's really cute and sweet. Now as for the pic... *pulls it out and slaps it on the thread* Hope ya like it
ooooo, nice one, good poem j0n0, but fix the beat
lol, thx but shes not smilling, it doesn't make sense if she doesn't smile.
Aww cute poem!
i really like the ending! Great job!
Yeah the beat is off, i'd try it later, too tried and not motivated right now.
But she was smiling. Just not that big.
Then
how about this one?
Although you were flirting with a girl, I, like most of the time, found other meanings. I thought of how much a difference a smile could make to the ones you don't appreciate that well and make them feel part of even though they might not be as close to you as others are. In sum I think less loved people deserve a little happiness from one no matter if that person ain't your favorite. Lol I think I over said it...hehe
This one is perfect, thx.
Why am I not surprise
mmmmm, beautiful
aww, you are ten times ahead of me :P this reminds me of something nice back in the good days