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Poem ~ Dreamer

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I wanna submit a poem I made. It kinda sucks but it shows my feelings at least...
So tell me what you think^^

The scent of dreams
my favorite
dreaming of him
I can see it
blinded from reality
caught in my fantasy
People call me a dreamer

Immortal love
in my dreams he is with me
Tears staining my face as I wake up
Why isn't he here?
Why do I cry when alone?
Can't he come comfort me?
People call me a dreamer

But all I really need is someone to love...

Seems cute. You must've really thought about it before writing it and expressed your feelings^.^

nice, seemed to be filled with emotions XD
good poem^^

It's very nice! It has nice imagery too ^^

It is a good poem. I liked it alot. You are better at writing poems than what I am. Yours atleast seems to be more like a poem. Unlike some of mine that I tried to make.

Nice poem, Eimin. Like it ^-^
Full of emotion and passion

beautiful poem with a lot of emotion and feeling!
it also makes me feel a bit sad.

u had a way with words.... i like ur poem alot...I can "feel" ur ur feelings in it

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