Since people seemed to like the first poem I submitted I'll submit another one, this one's pretty sad

I'm standing in silver rain
eternal glowing colors
Silver staining my cheeks
Can't forget you

Salty water melting with silver
I want to see you once again
Why did you disappear?

I'm standing in silver rain
my precious rose
guard my darlings grave

oh man, it is really sad cuz the one she loved is dead...
the silver rain is such beautiful imagery!

It's short and sweet, with lots of beautiful imagery... I havent read your last poem, but I think I'd like to now ^-^ It's very nice! (though sad )