Accidentaly posted in wrong forum..so im reposting .....

Well.... This is my first Poem i've posted on MT, so im kind've shy on it.. lol .. well nice comments are appreciated. bad ones are....just plain mean . Tell me Watcha Think

~*A Night of Death*~

It is a night of death, a song of dark desire,
wolves vent their loneliness. The eternal one
wakens.

Evil shrouds her pale form,
an eternal agony.

Her black hair cascades over
pale and delicate shoulders, and her
blood red lips part slightly, to taste the
blood streaming from the
pale flesh beneath
her.

Now a night of darkness,
I hunger.

-D.j.

Nice poem Eternal Darkness it's really cool!
it's dark and wicked lol but I like it so keep it up