Once again in the Sandbox..why not, it pays to get advice from all angles.
Besides, I like being able to make quick qualititative leaps in skill easily,
and this place helps. SO..
I found this about a month ago on some nameless website found through extensive
google-link-traversing. Personally, I like Hikari`s expression here, she looks
like she`s having WAY too much fun.
Hmmm, agreeing to Kai, the wall is soooo busy
You should clean the scan, it looks way too blurry compared to the rest of the
background...
I think on the background you put another two EVAs right? To make it less busy
and messy looking, I think you shouldn't texture (or lower opacity, or filter,
etc) the two EVAs behind her.. you should leave it as good quality scan I think
after that, having the abstract background would be okay
Rather than the technical aspect, you should work more on the composition of the
wall.. you should try to balance it
Very fun XP , but I have to agree that the bg and text is too sharp for the
scan, and the wall is a little too busy. It looks like you're going the abstract
path rather than the star field, so I guess just use less heavy brushes.
Humerous pic. Like the original art, but the text and scene outside is too
complex and busy. Maybe add a scene from End of Eva/Rebirth where the units 5
and up are fighting asuka. Good luck.
How about you just make it look like the cockpit of an eva...it takes a lot of
the noise out of the picture but you can still have all three pilots in it...
Once again in the Sandbox..why not, it pays to get advice from all angles. Besides, I like being able to make quick qualititative leaps in skill easily, and this place helps. SO..
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/9178/rejected6gv.jpg
I found this about a month ago on some nameless website found through extensive google-link-traversing. Personally, I like Hikari`s expression here, she looks like she`s having WAY too much fun.
first off the wall is way too busy.
gota have a main focus and then the other scans should be more merged into the bg.
scan quality is low. way too blurry and even a bit grainy.
maybe a good vector trace would fix that.
the bg is nice its too chaotic for the wall. unfortunately i dont have any suggestions for an alternate bg at the moment.
its a good start but it needs a reworking on the basic concept
Hmmm, agreeing to Kai, the wall is soooo busy
I think
after that, having the abstract background would be okay 
You should clean the scan, it looks way too blurry compared to the rest of the background...
I think on the background you put another two EVAs right? To make it less busy and messy looking, I think you shouldn't texture (or lower opacity, or filter, etc) the two EVAs behind her.. you should leave it as good quality scan
Rather than the technical aspect, you should work more on the composition of the wall.. you should try to balance it
Very fun XP , but I have to agree that the bg and text is too sharp for the scan, and the wall is a little too busy. It looks like you're going the abstract path rather than the star field, so I guess just use less heavy brushes.
Humerous pic. Like the original art, but the text and scene outside is too complex and busy. Maybe add a scene from End of Eva/Rebirth where the units 5 and up are fighting asuka. Good luck.
How about you just make it look like the cockpit of an eva...it takes a lot of the noise out of the picture but you can still have all three pilots in it...