I'd say that's fine as it is, i.e. the space doesn't really need filling in my
opinion
Only thing i can say is to fix the guy a bit, his edges are too sharp for his
surroundings, and the overall tone of the wall, also the light source is in
front of him, try to darken his back and less light flooding in behind him
Oh and since the light is so far ahead of him, some rays on his right arm would
look nice, just to show the light isn't just hitting his left
Hmmm, this looks quite nice I
like it..
It looks quite fine as it is without any more added element...
However, I think you should texture it with other texture, cos the way it is
now, I feel like am seeing a grainy scan and I wonder why there are lines (vertical) in the middle of the wall, as
well as black spot near the middle top and top left side there
The extraction of the scan still looks imperfect at some part, can see a bit of
uncropped outline on him..maybe you wanna scrutinize over that
The way the light shine so brightly, I think you should darken his back more..
cos the light really looks very very bright
Oh, and if you still want to add another element, am suggesting you put a text
on the left side there
I think with a little bit more work this will turn out to be a nice nice wall
Hope that helps
I thought it's alright though. personally I like the effect the way beyond the
grave walks towards the city as the sun shines at him. really nice effect you
have created there. perhaps add a liitle bit of bad guys in front of the scene
would make the thing look more....ummm...heroic (perhaps is the correct word I'm
using) but anyway, so far this is a good looking wallpaper to me though. keep up
the work and do a liitle bit more modification will lead you fine. go for it.
Very nice so far. Hm...I agree with tararen that you should change the texture,
cuz atm it looks too realistic, too just plain dirty, not grunge. & if you still want to fill it up
beyond a text element, I suggest some grunge brushes to accentuate the grunge
feel.
maybe it's just me but i thought the lines n what not gave an old photo ish feel
to the wall,
also i just noticed some cloud through the buildings, might wanna remove that
bit
How about adding a murder of crows flying towards the city scape. Difficult to
draw, I suppose, but worth it because the sky is rather blank without a little
more life to it. Overall though, the texture filter you used works really well.
It looks like an old "wanted" poster.
seriously i think youve got a good wall here.
only thing is, like bluSake and tareren said, change the texture a bit.
right now its too printed pixel look and the pattern is too continous. randomize
a bit and be more crazy with the brushes.
also get a very small brush and go to blur setting at an exteremely low % and
run along the edges of the scan cause its too cut looking still. the blur will
help soften the edges of the scan and help it blend more into the bg.
other than that its an awesome start.
tell me when you uploaded to MT.
ok guys thanks for the comments, i'll try most of your suggestion. please look
forward for my lastest wallpaper.
merged: 11-06-2005 ~ 10:49pm
hey guys i submmited this wallpaper already if you want to see the improvements
heres the link and just add a comments to it thanks for all of the
suggestions.
it not finished yet, theres so many space to fill. any comment or suggestions?
I'd say that's fine as it is, i.e. the space doesn't really need filling in my opinion
Only thing i can say is to fix the guy a bit, his edges are too sharp for his surroundings, and the overall tone of the wall, also the light source is in front of him, try to darken his back and less light flooding in behind him
Oh and since the light is so far ahead of him, some rays on his right arm would look nice, just to show the light isn't just hitting his left
Hmmm, this looks quite nice
I
like it..
and I wonder why there are lines (vertical) in the middle of the wall, as
well as black spot near the middle top and top left side there 
It looks quite fine as it is without any more added element...
However, I think you should texture it with other texture, cos the way it is now, I feel like am seeing a grainy scan
The extraction of the scan still looks imperfect at some part, can see a bit of uncropped outline on him..maybe you wanna scrutinize over that
The way the light shine so brightly, I think you should darken his back more.. cos the light really looks very very bright
Oh, and if you still want to add another element, am suggesting you put a text on the left side there
I think with a little bit more work this will turn out to be a nice nice wall
Hope that helps
I thought it's alright though. personally I like the effect the way beyond the grave walks towards the city as the sun shines at him. really nice effect you have created there. perhaps add a liitle bit of bad guys in front of the scene would make the thing look more....ummm...heroic (perhaps is the correct word I'm using) but anyway, so far this is a good looking wallpaper to me though. keep up the work and do a liitle bit more modification will lead you fine. go for it.
Very nice so far. Hm...I agree with tararen that you should change the texture, cuz atm it looks too realistic, too just plain dirty, not grunge. & if you still want to fill it up beyond a text element, I suggest some grunge brushes to accentuate the grunge feel.
maybe it's just me but i thought the lines n what not gave an old photo ish feel to the wall,
also i just noticed some cloud through the buildings, might wanna remove that bit
How about adding a murder of crows flying towards the city scape. Difficult to draw, I suppose, but worth it because the sky is rather blank without a little more life to it. Overall though, the texture filter you used works really well. It looks like an old "wanted" poster.
seriously i think youve got a good wall here.
only thing is, like bluSake and tareren said, change the texture a bit.
right now its too printed pixel look and the pattern is too continous. randomize a bit and be more crazy with the brushes.
also get a very small brush and go to blur setting at an exteremely low % and run along the edges of the scan cause its too cut looking still. the blur will help soften the edges of the scan and help it blend more into the bg.
other than that its an awesome start.
tell me when you uploaded to MT.
nice work
ok guys thanks for the comments, i'll try most of your suggestion. please look forward for my lastest wallpaper.
merged: 11-06-2005 ~ 10:49pm
hey guys i submmited this wallpaper already if you want to see the improvements heres the link and just add a comments to it thanks for all of the suggestions.
http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/191865/