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Bleach - Kurosaki ichigo

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It got quarantined, so I'll just post it ere, cuz I don't think it is a bad wallpaper :)

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y290/gatotsu/bleach_a.jpg

its not too bad, a bit simple and yeah, just an extraction of a screenshot (not too bad mind you) and a Plastic wrap effect, you have an idea to start with i give you that

It is an extraction, but I didn't apply plastic wrap or something like that :)

poor layout i must comment, too simple and just far too easy.
the extraction is alright, but plain and does fit with the darktheme of the wall. what would be good though if you can find the scan of the character and replace this one. making it more blended it.
beside the watery and smoky effect, there is nothing special, there is no color, no tones for the wall. well, just my thoughts.
overall 3/10 wall for my rating. keep up the good work

Poor layout & very messy I must say...
Your extraction is pretty good, But your scan is blur >_<
and the BG is messy.... I cant see the eyes well....
But you have something to start with...
Good Luck, Hope to see your work soon.....
Get rid of the white line on the left, btw...
and use gradient instead of black, add more texture like brushes would do good... cya around... ^^

  • bluSake
  • Retired Moderator
  • 2y 43wk ago

The extraction is mostly fine, but there are jagged lines here and there, especially around the ribbon of Ichigo's sword. More importantly though, the scan is not up to MT standards. It's too blurry, and would need to be vectored.

Also, I wouldn't recommend the use of small logos in corners: they look too much like afterthoughts.

Quote by Devildudetoo simple and just far too easy.

I'd just like to say that this comment has no place in an art critique. That has no relevance what-so-ever.

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